Thank you Dev for sharing the presentation. I have some proposals of modification: Page 6: Change the first para in this way: Any Internet End User Group or Group that supports the interests of individual end users can be a part of the At-Large Community. These include: Page 10: First para: replace « represent » by « defend » Page 11: second para: At-Large Community members may draft position statements, comment on draft statements and propose there drafts to the ALAC, and engage in ….. Page 14: Last para: ….. such as the SSAC, GNSO, ccNSO and GAC Page 15: First para: Replace « core mission » by « main activities » Page 16: replace the text by the list of At-Large Working Groups ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- Tijani BEN JEMAA Executive Director Mediterranean Federation of Internet Associations (FMAI) Phone: +216 98 330 114 +216 52 385 114 -----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Le 22 oct. 2016 à 21:09, Dev Anand Teelucksingh <devtee@gmail.com> a écrit :
Dear All,
A preliminary draft of the At-Large presentation for the At-Large meeting with the Nextgen students at ICANN57 can be found at
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1zFhDZ3m3mFyubb1crnVdqwmfBXU7_Vrdx-Pi...
Its based on the presentation done for the At-Large-Nextgen meeting at ICANN56 I've put some comments for possible improvements but wanted to share now to get additional suggestions from you all.
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