Hello Dev, everyone! +1 to Olivier and Seun as those are very wonderful suggestions. Here are my takes: * Yes, deleting slide number 5 will be ok but maybe you can insert the texts from the deleted slide to slide number 4 (the one with the pic) or select certain texts (such as "volunteer community"). * Would it take long if you will still call someone from a specific RALO to just introduce each area? An additional time will be needed to introduce each speaker and explain their take in each of the region. What if we just have them talk later after the whole presentation have been finished and maybe present each RALO in a more detailed manner (introduce the RALO, present engagements within the region, what policies have been delivered, etc.). Yours truly,Aris Ignacio From: Seun Ojedeji <seun.ojedeji@gmail.com> To: Olivier MJ Crepin-Leblond <ocl@gih.com> Cc: ALAC Subcommittee Outreach <alac-sc-outreach@atlarge-lists.icann.org> Sent: Wednesday, June 22, 2016 3:12 PM Subject: Re: [Alac-sc-outreach] Draft slides for O&E Nextgen Outreach meeting at ICANN56 ; please review, comment +1 to this, by 5 I assume this is to indicate examples and not necessarily to imply AtLarge only focuses on those 5.May be we should also follow the listing with the direct url reference to where more information about AtLarge policy topics can be found. On another note, can we have that pie chart that gives summary topics AtLarge has contributed to included (if we haven't reached the max slide limit)ThanksSent from my LG G4 Kindly excuse brevity and typosOn 22 Jun 2016 08:03, "Olivier MJ Crepin-Leblond" <ocl@gih.com> wrote: Dear Dev, another suggestion: I would add a slide between 11 & 12 with 5 policy topics which the At-Large Community is particularly focussed on. At present, we describe what At-Large does in very general terms, but I constantly get asked "what does At-Large actually do?" when it comes to policy. Kindest regards, Olivier On 22/06/2016 06:55, Dev Anand Teelucksingh wrote:
Dear All,
Based on the discussions on the O&E call on June 16 2016 (https://community.icann.org/x/3iKOAw), please find a first draft of the O&E presentation for the Meeting with the Nextgen participants on Monday June 27
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1pBfehxmMxpMCL2qSjUCM-hCE8cLUT_Y2VDfU...
Please review and make comments and suggestions.
Kind Regards,
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