Alan, I agree withi the new version. Regards Alberto -----Mensaje original----- De: alac-bounces@atlarge-lists.icann.org [mailto:alac-bounces@atlarge-lists.icann.org] En nombre de Alan Greenberg Enviado el: Friday, January 6, 2017 2:07 PM Para: ALAC <alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org> Asunto: [ALAC] IMPORTANT: Statement on Supplementary Procedures for Independent Review Process (IRP) A wording problem was brought to my attention regarding the statement that is currently undergoing a vote. I have reviewed the statement again and must admit that this slipped by me the first time. The 4th point currently reads: 4. The ALAC recommends that an ongoing observation of this new IRP Supplementary Procedures is performed to foster the continued improvement exercise for the benefit of end users. I find the wording awkward, and it conflicks with the closing remarks which correctly say that users are only affected indirectly. I am proposing that instead we say: 4. The ALAC recommends that as we gain experience with these new procedures, there is ongoing monitoring ensure continued improvement. I have discussed this with Leon who authored the statement and he has no problem with it. If anyone has a concern with this, please let me know immediately. At this point, only six people have voted. If any of them wish to alter their vote, that is fine. Alan _______________________________________________ ALAC mailing list ALAC@atlarge-lists.icann.org https://atlarge-lists.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/alac At-Large Online: http://www.atlarge.icann.org ALAC Working Wiki: https://community.icann.org/display/atlarge/At-Large+Advisory+Committee+(ALA C)