Hi, Alan, I have voted already, but agree with the rewording. Kaili ----- Original Message ----- From: "Alan Greenberg" <alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca> To: "ALAC" <alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org> Sent: Saturday, January 07, 2017 1:07 AM Subject: [ALAC] IMPORTANT: Statement on Supplementary Procedures for Independent Review Process (IRP)
A wording problem was brought to my attention regarding the statement that is currently undergoing a vote. I have reviewed the statement again and must admit that this slipped by me the first time.
The 4th point currently reads:
4. The ALAC recommends that an ongoing observation of this new IRP Supplementary Procedures is performed to foster the continued improvement exercise for the benefit of end users.
I find the wording awkward, and it conflicks with the closing remarks which correctly say that users are only affected indirectly.
I am proposing that instead we say:
4. The ALAC recommends that as we gain experience with these new procedures, there is ongoing monitoring ensure continued improvement.
I have discussed this with Leon who authored the statement and he has no problem with it.
If anyone has a concern with this, please let me know immediately. At this point, only six people have voted. If any of them wish to alter their vote, that is fine.
Alan
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