Thank you Alan for sharing the document. I spotted three minor typos which I highlighted in red. Thanks again Hadia From: Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca> Sent: Monday, November 21, 2022 2:03 AM To: Chantelle Doerksen <chantelle.doerksen@icann.org>; ALAC <alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org>; Hadia Abdelsalam Mokhtar EL miniawi <Hadia@tra.gov.eg> Subject: ALAC Comment on the EPDP Registration Data Draft Policy Attached is the formal reply form completed in accordance with the discussions during recent CPWG meetings. There are comments on: Section 4: Effective Date Section 10: Disclosure requests Background Thick Whois Transition Policy Alan