Ladies Thank you both for the editing. I’d love it if you could finalize comments within the next several hours - or within 23 hours, to give me time to read through the document and pick up and final edits. I think the organization largely works- the budget stuff and then text on the Operating Initiatives - under relevant headings so that it’s clear what is being talked about. But then probably both of you have done enough editing in your lives so I don’t need to say anything. I just want to do a final clean up tomorrow afternoon my time (21 hours from now) Thanks again to you both Holly
😊 On Fri, Feb 3, 2023 at 6:52 PM Holly Raiche via ALAC < alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org> wrote:
Ladies
Thank you both for the editing.
I’d love it if you could finalize comments within the next several hours - or within 23 hours, to give me time to read through the document and pick up and final edits.
I think the organization largely works- the budget stuff and then text on the Operating Initiatives - under relevant headings so that it’s clear what is being talked about. But then probably both of you have done enough editing in your lives so I don’t need to say anything. I just want to do a final clean up tomorrow afternoon my time (21 hours from now)
Thanks again to you both
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I am done with making changes. Too bad we didn't get anyone in on the UA issues. Marita On 2023-02-04 12:49 a.m., Maureen Hilyard wrote:
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On Fri, Feb 3, 2023 at 6:52 PM Holly Raiche via ALAC <alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org> wrote:
Ladies
Thank you both for the editing.
I’d love it if you could finalize comments within the next several hours - or within 23 hours, to give me time to read through the document and pick up and final edits.
I think the organization largely works- the budget stuff and then text on the Operating Initiatives - under relevant headings so that it’s clear what is being talked about. But then probably both of you have done enough editing in your lives so I don’t need to say anything. I just want to do a final clean up tomorrow afternoon my time (21 hours from now)
Thanks again to you both
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I've now done my run through some inline suggests some in the comments 1 just re formatting for @Chantelle Doerksen <chantelle.doerksen@icann.org> <https://about.me/cheryl.LangdonOrr?promo=email_sig&utm_source=product&utm_me...> Cheryl Langdon-Orr about.me/cheryl.LangdonOrr <https://about.me/cheryl.LangdonOrr?promo=email_sig&utm_source=product&utm_me...> On Sun, 5 Feb 2023 at 02:03, Marita Moll via ALAC < alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org> wrote:
I am done with making changes. Too bad we didn't get anyone in on the UA issues.
Marita On 2023-02-04 12:49 a.m., Maureen Hilyard wrote:
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On Fri, Feb 3, 2023 at 6:52 PM Holly Raiche via ALAC < alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org> wrote:
Ladies
Thank you both for the editing.
I’d love it if you could finalize comments within the next several hours - or within 23 hours, to give me time to read through the document and pick up and final edits.
I think the organization largely works- the budget stuff and then text on the Operating Initiatives - under relevant headings so that it’s clear what is being talked about. But then probably both of you have done enough editing in your lives so I don’t need to say anything. I just want to do a final clean up tomorrow afternoon my time (21 hours from now)
Thanks again to you both
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Im going through them now. Maureen did put something in about UA so it’s there Holly
On Feb 5, 2023, at 5:32 PM, Cheryl Langdon-Orr <langdonorr@gmail.com> wrote:
I've now done my run through some inline suggests some in the comments 1 just re formatting for @Chantelle Doerksen <mailto:chantelle.doerksen@icann.org> <https://about.me/cheryl.LangdonOrr?promo=email_sig&utm_source=product&utm_me...> Cheryl Langdon-Orr about.me/cheryl.LangdonOrr <https://about.me/cheryl.LangdonOrr?promo=email_sig&utm_source=product&utm_me...>
On Sun, 5 Feb 2023 at 02:03, Marita Moll via ALAC <alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org <mailto:alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org>> wrote: I am done with making changes. Too bad we didn't get anyone in on the UA issues.
Marita
On 2023-02-04 12:49 a.m., Maureen Hilyard wrote:
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On Fri, Feb 3, 2023 at 6:52 PM Holly Raiche via ALAC <alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org <mailto:alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org>> wrote: Ladies
Thank you both for the editing.
I’d love it if you could finalize comments within the next several hours - or within 23 hours, to give me time to read through the document and pick up and final edits.
I think the organization largely works- the budget stuff and then text on the Operating Initiatives - under relevant headings so that it’s clear what is being talked about. But then probably both of you have done enough editing in your lives so I don’t need to say anything. I just want to do a final clean up tomorrow afternoon my time (21 hours from now)
Thanks again to you both
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And I’ve also had a run through - bit of editing to ensure clarity etc Holly
On Feb 5, 2023, at 5:32 PM, Cheryl Langdon-Orr <langdonorr@gmail.com> wrote:
I've now done my run through some inline suggests some in the comments 1 just re formatting for @Chantelle Doerksen <mailto:chantelle.doerksen@icann.org> <https://about.me/cheryl.LangdonOrr?promo=email_sig&utm_source=product&utm_me...> Cheryl Langdon-Orr about.me/cheryl.LangdonOrr <https://about.me/cheryl.LangdonOrr?promo=email_sig&utm_source=product&utm_me...>
On Sun, 5 Feb 2023 at 02:03, Marita Moll via ALAC <alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org <mailto:alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org>> wrote: I am done with making changes. Too bad we didn't get anyone in on the UA issues.
Marita
On 2023-02-04 12:49 a.m., Maureen Hilyard wrote:
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On Fri, Feb 3, 2023 at 6:52 PM Holly Raiche via ALAC <alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org <mailto:alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org>> wrote: Ladies
Thank you both for the editing.
I’d love it if you could finalize comments within the next several hours - or within 23 hours, to give me time to read through the document and pick up and final edits.
I think the organization largely works- the budget stuff and then text on the Operating Initiatives - under relevant headings so that it’s clear what is being talked about. But then probably both of you have done enough editing in your lives so I don’t need to say anything. I just want to do a final clean up tomorrow afternoon my time (21 hours from now)
Thanks again to you both
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