Hi, Unfortunately I cannot seem to read your file. I seem to have that problem a lot with files from our machine but not files from others. All I see is a winmail.dat avri On 29 Mar 2013, at 21:37, Brian Cute wrote:
Larry, Carlos and Avri,
I have accepted your suggested edits and draw your attention to two remaining questions:
Paragraph regarding AoC 9.1(b): question #6 in the document. Carlos clarified that the questions focus on the GAC. Therefore, the substance of the question is not redundant with question #4. I made one edit and ask for final views on this question.
Paragraph regarding AoC 9.1(e): question #15 in the document. Avri, I made a suggested edit in an attempt to answer Larry's request for clarification. Is my edit consistent with the intent of your question and does it add clarity?
Please weigh in as soon as possible so we can get this document to Staff for publication to the Community. Thank you.
Brian
On 3/29/13 1:23 PM, "Larry Strickling" <LStrickling@ntia.doc.gov> wrote:
Some suggested edits and comments. I accepted all of Brian's changes and then edited from there.
-----Original Message----- From: Brian Cute [mailto:bcute@pir.org] Sent: Thursday, March 28, 2013 11:28 PM To: Larry Strickling; Carlos Raul Gutierrez; Avril Doria Cc: ATRT2 Subject: Questions for Public Comment
For Larry, Carlos and Avri,
Please review the edited version of the Questions for Public Comment. I have tried to organize the questions under specific headings as suggested by Olivier. Please provide a rapid response with final edits to the document as I would like to provide the final version to ICANN Staff for translation and posting as soon as possible. Thank you.
Regards, Brian
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