Larisa, The edits look fine to me, however I gather Olivier has some concern regarding the write up of SSR Rec 27: "Recommendation 27 review is too complacent." as well as a view that the commentary for that recommendation does not reflect the ALAC statement. I'm happy to revise, but am unsure how to address his concerns without additional information. Regards, -drc On Dec 19, 2013, at 8:25 AM, Larisa B. Gurnick <larisa.gurnick@icann.org> wrote:
David, Please review the proposed edits to Appendix C – SSR Review Implementation and provide staff with your final edits by 16 UTC on Friday, 20 December.
Thank you,
Larisa B. Gurnick Consultant/Senior Director, Organizational Reviews Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) larisa.gurnick@icann.org 310 383-8995
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