Thanks, all. I sill submit to ICANN staff at 2pm Eastern time today, so get me any other edits beforehand. As noted over the weekend, this is a response to questions about administrative program for travel support, so I do not think it requires membership review and approval in the same way as a policy comment or position. From: Bc-excomm <bc-excomm-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Lawrence OlaWale-Roberts <icann@microboss.org> Date: Monday, December 4, 2017 at 3:14 AM To: Marilyn Cade <marilynscade@hotmail.com> Cc: BC Executive Committee <bc-excomm@icann.org>, BC Outreach <bc-outreach@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Bc-excomm] [Bc-outreach] Fw: updated draft for feedback... msc/gabi/omar/tola Thanks Marylin for the excellent job you have done on this document and to Gabi, Omar and Tola for your edits. Feeling that this is a good opportunity to also bring to the fore issues bothering around visa assistance to travelers I have inserted a text that can be edited into the base of No.4. Alongside some minor edits I also presume the first paragraph of No. 9 should read AGM 2018. Do pardon me if I am wrong. Thanks all for the detailed submission. Marylin if you will I would also be lending my voice to the submission on the fellowship process. Thanks, Lawrence. On Sun, December 3, 2017 11:08 pm, Marilyn Cade wrote: Dear colleagues on the Outreach committee and also the Excomm... I have had a chance to have a call with Omar and take into account Gabi, Tola comments. Omar and I discussed that we indeed should not focus on the Fellowship program but more broadly, so I made an effort to do that. So far, Omar, Gabi, Tola and I also think that we should have a separate working effort on improvements to the Fellowship Program that we can do in January, and submit to the fuller BC and then to ICANN. Thus, this new edit is more focused, and just references "more to come" comments specific to the BC. Comments are very welcomed, and I tried to make this "preliminary", so Susan/Steve, we might even want to say that these are preliminary comments. Many thanks to all of you who have commented, including Barbara and Steve and Jimson from the ExeComm and to the Outreach Committee. I will be online tomorrow around 8 am and will try to finalize any comments that come in by noon, so that Susan/Steve can then make our submission. Marilyn _______________________________________________ Bc-outreach mailing list Bc-outreach@icann.org<mailto:Bc-outreach@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/bc-outreach