Hi Lawrence, Item 3.0 Removing Barrier to Small Business Membership was left there for the Charter drafting team to incorporate their response to John Berard's public comment (did you read that?). Also, my thinking is not to have an exclusive BC Outreach Comment but a general comment submitted by the BC covering all the scope of comments made now and that would come before the close of public comments on the Charter. If that is ok, then you may need to re-edit the draft you edited. Cheers, JO --------- Original Message --------- Subject: Re: [Bc-outreach] thoughts on language From: "Lawrence OlaWale-Roberts" <icann@microboss.org> Date: 1/16/17 6:05 am To: "Marilyn Cade" <marilynscade@hotmail.com> Cc: "Jimson Olufuye" <jolufuye@kontemporary.net>, "Steve DelBianco" <sdelbianco@netchoice.org>, "bc-outreach@icann.org" <bc-outreach@icann.org> Dear Andrew, Marylin and Jimson, I have made an attempt here to merge all your submissions on the draft charter into one and included mine into a version 1, herein attached. Using Jimson's comment as the base, i have tried to inculcate Andrew, Marylin and my comment into one document that still appears too bulky to pass for a final. I suggest we remove the graphs that show BC members by Numbers and percentage except they could be made clearer any other point we find unnecessary. looking forward to our comments on this. LOR On Sat, January 14, 2017 3:13 pm, Marilyn Cade wrote:
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