Hi Mallory, Yes, we did. Here are the final versions:- Human Rights Gap Analysis for ICANN’s Universal Acceptance Roadmap for Domain Name Registry and Registrar Systems:- https://itp.cdn.icann.org/public-comment/proceeding/Universal%20Acceptance%2... Human Rights Gap Analysis for ICANN’s Pilot Holistic Review Draft Terms of Reference:- https://itp.cdn.icann.org/public-comment/proceeding/Pilot%20Holistic%20Revie... Human Rights Gap Analysis for ICANN’s Proposed Amendments to the SLA for the IANA Numbering Services:- https://itp.cdn.icann.org/public-comment/proceeding/Proposed%20Amendments%20... Human Rights Gap Analysis for ICANN’s Draft IANA and PTI FY24 Operating Plan and Budgets:- https://itp.cdn.icann.org/public-comment/proceeding/Draft%20IANA%20and%20PTI... I will be sending an email shortly with a doodle poll for us to discuss more potential submissions for the future. Best Regards, Ephraim Percy Kenyanito On 12/12/2022 20:15, Mallory Knodel via cc-humanrights wrote:
Hi Ephraim,
These are both great. They are short and to the point.
Did they get submitted as comments already?
-Mallory
On 10/24/22 4:07 PM, Ephraim Percy Kenyanito via cc-humanrights wrote:
Dear Colleagues,
I had volunteered during our last NCSG call to draft the first draft Human Rights Gap Analysis for two public comments, I have been lucky to be able to work on the drafts with two CCWP-HR members please find two drafts here:
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Universal Acceptance Roadmap for Domain Name Registry and Registrar Systems – 31 Oct- https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jX53V0I2XKuGnhgCHLAvoy9eHg8lQuks4U6oBQhJ...
2.
Pilot Holistic Review Draft Terms of Reference – 10 Nov- https://docs.google.com/document/d/10CK9s2r1WldKAOzZJvk35lkdQE5t8fa-JExnlJXU...
We welcome your feedback.
Please feel free to add any comments etc and I will be happy to share a second version ASAP.
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Best Regards,
Ephraim Percy Kenyanito
Public Policy Specialist/ Regulatory Affairs Specialist/ Project Manager- International Trade, Technology, Media & Telecommunications Laws Website: https://ekenyanito.com/ Twitter: @ekenyanito <https://twitter.com/ekenyanito> PGP Fingerprint: B0FA394AF73DEB7AA1FDC7360CFED26DE6BA8DC1
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