Hi, Many thanks to those involved in this draft, which covers all of the aspects I think. My only comment is whether we could make the submission a little more easy to read and understand for people, particularly those who do not have English as their first language. My prompt for this was needing to look up 'adagium' , but also some of the sentences are quite long and bring in several things at once, meaning you need to hold a list in your mind whilst reading. If others agree, I wonder if we could get some support from a willing marketing/communications ccTLD person to assist? Kind regards, Lesley Lesley Cowley, OBE CEO Nominet Minerva House Edmund Halley Road Oxford Science Park Oxford, OX4 4DQ UK Tel: +44-(0)-1865-332211 http://www.nominet.org.uk/ From: Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org<mailto:bart.boswinkel@icann.org>> Date: Sun, 27 Nov 2011 21:34:49 -0800 To: ccNSO Council <ccnso-council@icann.org<mailto:ccnso-council@icann.org>> Cc: Stephen Deerhake <SDeerhake@nic.as<mailto:SDeerhake@nic.as>>, Mathieu Weill <mathieu.weill@afnic.fr<mailto:mathieu.weill@afnic.fr>>, Demi Getschko <demi@nic.br<mailto:demi@nic.br>>, Kathryn Reynolds <kathryn.reynolds@cira.ca<mailto:kathryn.reynolds@cira.ca>>, Paulos Nyirenda <paulos@sdnp.org.mw<mailto:paulos@sdnp.org.mw>>, "Burr, Becky" <Becky.Burr@wilmerhale.com<mailto:Becky.Burr@wilmerhale.com>> Subject: [ccnso-council] DraftccNSO submission Geographic Regions WG recommendations Dear all, Included the draft for the ccNSO submission on the draft Recommendations of the Geographic Regions WG ( see: http://www.icann.org/en/announcements/announcement-3-30sep11-en.htm). The public comment period closes at 15December 2011. If you have any comments please let us know Friday 2 December 2011. Once updated the draft will be send to the ccNSO membership for comments. On behalf of the drafting group, kind regards, Bart