Staff asked me to try to incorporate tha various comments that have been made into a new draft of the document section describing the "review" panels. The commented version is at https://docs.google.com/document/d/11dusiYnVTZhb_OvwZTvgKf_-5lF9NuzTAq6uV0fw.... There were extensive edits and comments, many conflicting with each other. I have tried to find a middle ground, but have left a number of "alternatives" which are in square brackets and highlighted. In general, these were areas where the positions were so different that I didn't feel that as an "editer" I had the discretion to choose. I have also renamed the groups to try to use unique words for each function (and not to use words which might confuse them with the project evaluation/selection process. Alan