Dear Wang Wei, I gave the updated document a slow proofread this morning. As you can see, I found little substantial, but I added a few comments. I think it addresses most of the points in the IP's document, although "critical code points for modern use", a final decision on hanja and possibly "user communities for gathering public comments" may need a little more work. Looking forward to seeing you in London, which is experiencing something of a heat wave, Regards, Chris. -- Research Associate in Linguistic Computing, Centre for Digital Humanities, UCL, Gower St, London WC1E 6BT Tel +44 20 7679 1599 (int 31599) ucl.ac.uk/dis/people/chrisdillon From: chinesegp-bounces@icann.org [mailto:chinesegp-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Wang Wei Sent: 20 June 2014 17:04 To: ChineseGP@icann.org Subject: [ChineseGP] new version of CGP Proposal Dear all ICANN gave us some comments in early May (attached PDF) Targeting those comments, some members revised the proposal as the attached DOCX. Please give your valuable suggestions. Chris, we are in great need of your native-English help. Regards Wang Wei