Stephanie, One possibility would be to reference Specification 1, 1.2, 1.3 and 1.4 paragraphs of the 2012+ gTLD registry agreements: https://newgtlds.icann.org/sites/default/files/agreements/agreement-approved... <https://newgtlds.icann.org/sites/default/files/agreements/agreement-approved...> But different agreements would have the same text in different parts. Rubens
On 28 Jun 2018, at 12:41, Stephanie Perrin <stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca> wrote:
Thanks Rubens, I did note the explanation of picket fence above, but it is insufficient. Would suggest perhaps a footnote that goes into detail with e.g. reference to sample clauses, positioning in the text perhaps better at first introduction.
SP On 2018-06-28 12:35, Rubens Kuhl wrote:
Stephanie,
I added some replies to your text.
Rubens
On 28 Jun 2018, at 12:11, Stephanie Perrin <stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca <mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca>> wrote:
I have made extensive comments to the document.
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