Sorry, this was lost in my preparation for ITU SG17. I’m still there, but I have just scanned the template and have a few minor comments: Section 4 heading: “... can *also* be...”? 4.a: delete “In addiction,” 6.b. Weren’t we building this into the schedule : it’s not fair to leave this to the review team! 9.5. Question: if there were to be recommendations, could the consultation be done after submission of the review as part of any implementation process? I am slightly nervous that we might see a minor recommendation delaying the report and the report is to the councils who would have responsibility for implementation. 6. Isn’t Barcelona ICANN 63 (twice)? 10. I thought we’d trimmed the timeline...? I don’t particularly need another call until after the CSC and Council discussions. I’m not scheduled to be in Barcelona, but could possibly, and if necessary, do an overnight trip. But not on Monday! However, I’m sure that you will manage fine without me and I could be in on remote. Hope this helps Martin Martin Boyle Sent from my iPhone
On 4 Sep 2018, at 23:27, Maria Otanes <maria.otanes@icann.org> wrote:
Dear all,
As a friendly reminder, I’m attaching the template document Bart circulated last week. Please let us know if you have any comments. Would you like to schedule an additional call?
The next CSC meeting is scheduled for 17 September at 20:00 UTC. As discussed on last week’s call, we’ve included an agenda item for this team to meet with the CSC.
Lastly, when would you like to schedule the Effectiveness Review Team public session in Barcelona? May I suggest Monday, 22 October block 13:30-15:00? Please let me know if that works for you.
Best, Ria
From: CSC-EffectivenessRT <csc-effectivenessrt-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org> Date: Wednesday, August 29, 2018 at 8:32 AM To: "csc-effectivenessrt@icann.org" <csc-effectivenessrt@icann.org> Subject: Re: [CSC-EffectivenessRT] Draft Template CSC Effectiveness Review
Dear all, Please find included redline and clean version of template document. In addition to Philippe’s suggested changes, I have: Included sentence to mandate the RT to develop relevant performance indicators and use relevant metrics, reflecting the CSC Effectivenss measures as listed by martin and you have accepted Updated section 9 about process/procedure to reflect yesterday’s discussion Updated the schedule per yesterday’s discussion
Kind regards, Bart From: CSC-EffectivenessRT <csc-effectivenessrt-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of "philippe.fouquart@orange.com" <philippe.fouquart@orange.com> Date: Tuesday 28 August 2018 at 16:10 To: Maria Otanes <maria.otanes@icann.org>, "csc-effectivenessrt@icann.org" <csc-effectivenessrt@icann.org> Subject: Re: [CSC-EffectivenessRT] Draft Template CSC Effectiveness Review
Hi everyone,
Following our discussion earlier today, I made a quick revision of the attached. Editorial changes I’d say: Have attempted to include Debbie’s suggestion on section 6 to remove “possible”. We need to make sure that under 10 the number of [public] sessions matches our discussion
Regarding the point of how CSC may review the KPIs and metrics moving forward, I believe this falls under 3.C.i , but tend to think this belongs to the review itself rather than to the methodology so I didn’t change the text. I’d suggest we keep this for the review itself.
Regards, Philippe
From: CSC-EffectivenessRT [mailto:csc-effectivenessrt-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Maria Otanes Sent: Monday, August 27, 2018 3:52 PM To: csc-effectivenessrt@icann.org Subject: [CSC-EffectivenessRT] Draft Template CSC Effectiveness Review
Dear Effectiveness Review Team,
Please find the draft template CSC Effectiveness Review document.
It can also be found on the Wiki: https://community.icann.org/x/JRRpBQ
All the best, Ria
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