Dear all, Please find included redline and clean version of template document. In addition to Philippe’s suggested changes, I have: Included sentence to mandate the RT to develop relevant performance indicators and use relevant metrics, reflecting the CSC Effectivenss measures as listed by martin and you have accepted Updated section 9 about process/procedure to reflect yesterday’s discussion Updated the schedule per yesterday’s discussion Kind regards, Bart From: CSC-EffectivenessRT <csc-effectivenessrt-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of "philippe.fouquart@orange.com" <philippe.fouquart@orange.com> Date: Tuesday 28 August 2018 at 16:10 To: Maria Otanes <maria.otanes@icann.org>, "csc-effectivenessrt@icann.org" <csc-effectivenessrt@icann.org> Subject: Re: [CSC-EffectivenessRT] Draft Template CSC Effectiveness Review Hi everyone, Following our discussion earlier today, I made a quick revision of the attached. Editorial changes I’d say: Have attempted to include Debbie’s suggestion on section 6 to remove “possible”. We need to make sure that under 10 the number of [public] sessions matches our discussion Regarding the point of how CSC may review the KPIs and metrics moving forward, I believe this falls under 3.C.i , but tend to think this belongs to the review itself rather than to the methodology so I didn’t change the text. I’d suggest we keep this for the review itself. Regards, Philippe From: CSC-EffectivenessRT [mailto:csc-effectivenessrt-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Maria Otanes Sent: Monday, August 27, 2018 3:52 PM To: csc-effectivenessrt@icann.org Subject: [CSC-EffectivenessRT] Draft Template CSC Effectiveness Review Dear Effectiveness Review Team, Please find the draft template CSC Effectiveness Review document. It can also be found on the Wiki: https://community.icann.org/x/JRRpBQ All the best, Ria _______________________________________________________________________________________________ Ria Otanes Secretariat Operations Coordinator Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 202 249 7540 Mobile: +1 202 679 5185 Skype: maria.otanes.icann Washington, DC Office | UTC-4 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you.