Thanks Maria. Minor point: a non-native speaker like me can’t parse the double negative of the second sentence on page 5 under Method of review. As stated, the CSC Charter nor other documentation does not specify what it means by, or how to measure, “effectiveness”. Maybe say “As stated, neither…nor [any]… specifies…” Regards, Philippe From: CSC-EffectivenessRT [mailto:csc-effectivenessrt-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Maria Otanes Sent: Tuesday, November 27, 2018 5:45 PM To: csc-effectivenessrt@icann.org Subject: [CSC-EffectivenessRT] CSC Effectiveness Review Team Draft Interim Report Dear Effectiveness Review Team, Attached, please find the Draft Interim Report of the CSC Effectiveness Review Team. Friendly reminder, our next call is scheduled for tomorrow, Wednesday, 28 November at 18:00 UTC. Best, Ria _______________________________________________________________________________________________ Ria Otanes Secretariat Operations Coordinator Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 202 249 7540 Mobile: +1 202 679 5185 Skype: maria.otanes.icann Washington, DC Office | UTC-5 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you.