Hi Bart This looks great, thank you. I found a couple of minor things and will note them here as the word doc was only the report and nothing else. Executive Summary Need an extra line between paras 5 and 6 Under 4.3.2 Para 4, second sentence: limited mandate HAS made it ... Para 7, need a period between ... IANA Functions Operator and The Proposed Amended Charter Scope of Responsibilities Para 6, after Remedial Action Procedures please put (RAP). And that’s all I have. I would like to see the language for the posting page before it goes up if that’s possible. Thanks again Bart Donna Sent from my iPhone On Apr 6, 2018, at 9:51 AM, Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org<mailto:bart.boswinkel@icann.org>> wrote: Dear all, Please find included the (draft) final version of the initial report. If no comments by Monday COB CET I will use this version for publication. Unfortunately the PDF version does not show the deleted sections. Finally I noticed that the following sentence was still included in the version Donna circulated under the review section: The CSC or the IANA Functions Operator can request a review or change to service levels. Any proposed changes to service levels as a result of the review must be agreed to by the ccNSO and GNSO. I deleted it as it superfluous given the new language under scope of responsibilities. Kind regards, Bart <Initial Report CSC Charter Review Team.pdf> <Initial Report CSC Charter Review Team.docx> _______________________________________________ CSC-Review mailing list CSC-Review@icann.org<mailto:CSC-Review@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/csc-review