Ditto. I am fine with that. From: cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Burr, Becky Sent: 12 August 2014 22:09 To: Gomes, Chuck; Allan MacGillivray; Grace Abuhamad; CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org Subject: Re: [CWG-DT-Stewardship] 6 hours left -- Final Edits due at 23:59 UTC on 12 August +1 J. Beckwith Burr Neustar, Inc. / Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer 1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006 Office: + 1.202.533.2932 Mobile: +1.202.352.6367 / becky.burr@neustar.biz / www.neustar.biz From: <Gomes>, Chuck Gomes <cgomes@verisign.com> Date: Tuesday, August 12, 2014 at 2:54 PM To: Allan MacGillivray <allan.macgillivray@cira.ca>, Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad@icann.org>, "CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org" <CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org> Subject: Re: [CWG-DT-Stewardship] 6 hours left -- Final Edits due at 23:59 UTC on 12 August Good catch Allan. I am fine with your suggested name change. Chuck From: cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Allan MacGillivray Sent: Tuesday, August 12, 2014 2:40 PM To: Grace Abuhamad; CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org Subject: Re: [CWG-DT-Stewardship] 6 hours left -- Final Edits due at 23:59 UTC on 12 August One thing that just struck me was the Working Group's name. Currently it is "Cross Community Working Group to Develop an IANA Stewardship Transition Proposal". To avoid an confusion, I suggest that we add a reference to the 'naming community' to make it clear that we are not focussing on addressing or protocol parameters. It could be something like "Cross Community Working Group to Develop an IANA Stewardship Transition Proposal on Naming Related Functions" From:cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org[mailto:cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@ icann.org]On Behalf Of Grace Abuhamad Sent: August-12-14 2:01 PM To: Grace Abuhamad; CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org Subject: [CWG-DT-Stewardship] 6 hours left -- Final Edits due at 23:59 UTC on 12 August Hi all, Just a quick reminder that we are 6h away from our final edits deadline. From: Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad@icann.org> Date: Monday, August 11, 2014 9:59 PM To: "CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org" <CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org> Subject: [CWG-DT-Stewardship] Latest Draft Charter -- Final Edits due at 23:59 UTC on 12 August (in 22 hours!) Hi all, Attached are two versions of the updated draft charter (redline and clean). I used Stephanie's "minor edits" document as the base for the rest of the proposed changes. I've outlined the changes I made for your reference: * Section II: Included Julie's text (first sentence of "Goals & Objectives" section) * Section III: Deleted everything except for the first sentence in point 2 of the work plan, upon Chuck's suggestion. * Section IV: * Included Stephanie's text. * Completed text relating to staff assignment in "Staffing & Resources" (Grace/Staff). * Included Allan's text on resourcing (can the DT confirm the placement of the text in the charter?). Note: I am missing text from Byron, but I left the text discussed on the call as a placeholder. Final edits are due at 23:59 UTC on 12 August (in 22 hours!). Please let me know if you would like to schedule a final call. - Grace