makes sense avri On 02-Aug-14 16:59, Gomes, Chuck wrote:

I think this is fine but suggest that we state what is in scope first, i.e., mainly changing the order of the wording:

“The accountability function currently performed by NTIA regarding the RZM role, as well as the discussion of the RZM management administrative interface currently used by NTIA are within the scope of the CWG. The issue of who performs the Root Zone Maintainer (RZM) role is not in scope for the CWG and should be dealt with in a subsequent effort as needed.”

Note that I also left out the reference to ICANN. I would like to think that ICANN will continue to perform the IANA role but if they refuse real accountability we need to keep the option open that it could change. The IANA function is the main leverage we have to motivate them to accept independent accountability.

Chuck

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Hello Avri and Chuck,

What about:

While the issue of who performs the Root Zone Maintainer (RZM) role is not in scope for the CWG and should be dealt with in a subsequent effort as needed, the accountability function currently performed by NTIA regarding the RZM role, as well as the discussion of the administrative interface between ICANN and the RZM management function, are within the scope of the CWG.

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Hi,

The following is language that chuck and I worked on to complete our

assignment:

The accountability function currently performed by NTIA regarding the

Root Zone Maintainer (RZM) role is within the scope of the CWG. While

the issue of who performs the RZM role is not in scope for the CWG and

should be dealt with in a subsequent effort as needed, discussion of the

administrative interface between ICANN and the RZM management function

is within scope.

Thanks

avri

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