I think this is fine but suggest that we state what is in scope first, i.e., mainly changing the order of the wording: "The accountability function currently performed by NTIA regarding the RZM role, as well as the discussion of the RZM management administrative interface currently used by NTIA are within the scope of the CWG. The issue of who performs the Root Zone Maintainer (RZM) role is not in scope for the CWG and should be dealt with in a subsequent effort as needed." Note that I also left out the reference to ICANN. I would like to think that ICANN will continue to perform the IANA role but if they refuse real accountability we need to keep the option open that it could change. The IANA function is the main leverage we have to motivate them to accept independent accountability. Chuck From: cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Tijani BEN JEMAA Sent: Saturday, August 02, 2014 6:07 AM To: 'Avri Doria'; CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org Subject: Re: [CWG-DT-Stewardship] Recommended language related to RZM role discussions in CWG Hello Avri and Chuck, What about: While the issue of who performs the Root Zone Maintainer (RZM) role is not in scope for the CWG and should be dealt with in a subsequent effort as needed, the accountability function currently performed by NTIA regarding the RZM role, as well as the discussion of the administrative interface between ICANN and the RZM management function, are within the scope of the CWG. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Tijani BEN JEMAA Executive Director Mediterranean Federation of Internet Associations (FMAI) Phone: + 216 41 649 605 Mobile: + 216 98 330 114 Fax: + 216 70 853 376 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- -----Message d'origine----- De : cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org<mailto:cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org]<mailto:[mailto:cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org]> De la part de Avri Doria Envoyé : jeudi 31 juillet 2014 19:57 À : CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org<mailto:CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org> Objet : [CWG-DT-Stewardship] Recommended language related to RZM role discussions in CWG Hi, The following is language that chuck and I worked on to complete our assignment: The accountability function currently performed by NTIA regarding the Root Zone Maintainer (RZM) role is within the scope of the CWG. While the issue of who performs the RZM role is not in scope for the CWG and should be dealt with in a subsequent effort as needed, discussion of the administrative interface between ICANN and the RZM management function is within scope. Thanks avri _______________________________________________ CWG-DT-Stewardship mailing list CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org<mailto:CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/cwg-dt-stewardship ________________________________ [http://static.avast.com/emails/avast-mail-stamp.png]<http://www.avast.com/> Ce courrier électronique ne contient aucun virus ou logiciel malveillant parce que la protection Antivirus avast!<http://www.avast.com/> est active.