Dear all, Please find attached, in “redlined” format, an updated tabular summary of the public comments received to our Draft Framework. The updates reflect the staff understanding of the discussion that took place on the working group call earlier this week, on 10 May. The next call will be held on 24 May at 1800 UTC. Staff expects that Becky and John, our co-chairs, will provide an update on discussions they are planning to have with interested Board Members at the Global Domains Division (GDD) Summit next week, and a continuation of our review of the remaining public comments. Please note that an open cross-community session on our Framework has been scheduled for the ICANN56 meeting in Helsinki, on Wednesday 29 June at 1800 Helsinki time. Our hope is that by that time we will be in a position to produce an updated, proposed Final Framework based on our analysis of the public comments, which can be presented to the community at that session for feedback and discussion. Thanks and cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) Email: mary.wong@icann.org Telephone: +1-603-5744889 From: Mary Wong <mary.wong@icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org>> Date: Tuesday, May 10, 2016 at 16:07 To: "cwg-framework-principles@icann.org<mailto:cwg-framework-principles@icann.org>" <cwg-framework-principles@icann.org<mailto:cwg-framework-principles@icann.org>> Subject: Re: Report of public comments for review at our upcoming meeting Dear all, Further to the message below, and again in preparation for our meeting coming up in a few hours, I’m pleased to confirm that the staff report of public comments has now been published on the ICANN website, thereby closing the public forum for our Draft Framework: https://www.icann.org/public-comments/ccwg-framework-principles-draft-2016-0.... We hope that the report as well as the tabular Public Comment Review Tool circulated a few days ago will be helpful to you as you review the public comments we received with a view toward updating and/or amending our draft document, as appropriate. Thanks and cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) Email: mary.wong@icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> Telephone: +1-603-5744889 From: Mary Wong <mary.wong@icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org>> Date: Saturday, May 7, 2016 at 02:54 To: "cwg-framework-principles@icann.org<mailto:cwg-framework-principles@icann.org>" <cwg-framework-principles@icann.org<mailto:cwg-framework-principles@icann.org>> Subject: Report of public comments for review at our upcoming meeting Dear all, To facilitate the group’s discussion at our upcoming meeting on Tuesday 10 May at 1800 UTC, and to aid your review of all the public comments that we received in response to our publication of the Draft Framework of Principles for Future CCWGs, staff has prepared the attached Public Comment Review Tool. This document is a tabular summary, excerpting the most relevant parts of each comment submitted corresponding to the specific Section and Open Question from our Draft Framework. In total, 15 relevant submissions were received from individuals as well as groups. Most of the individual commenters drew from their experiences in a number of CCWGs (including the CCWG-Accountability), and the group submissions included comments from the ALAC, the GNSO’s Registries Stakeholder Group and Intellectual Property Constituency, the International Chamber of Commerce, the Government of France and the ICANN Board. Please note that the Public Comment Review Tool does not replace your review of each of the comments received, as the full nuances of all the commenters’ concerns may need to be viewed in their full context. In this regard, allow me to take the liberty of noting, in particular, that more specific details were provided in the comments of the Government of France and the ICANN Board as well as some individual commenters (such as Mathieu Weill, co-chair of the CCWG-Accountability) that could fairly be excerpted and summarized in the Tool. For that reason, you should refer to the full set of comments at https://forum.icann.org/lists/comments-ccwg-framework-principles-22feb16/. The staff report of public comments received has been submitted for publication as well. All the relevant documents can also be viewed and downloaded from our group’s collaborative wiki space: see https://community.icann.org/x/SwSOAw for a copy of the Public Comment Review Tool and the staff report of public comments, and https://community.icann.org/x/zASOAw for a copy of the Draft Framework of Principles as published in February. Thanks and cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) Email: mary.wong@icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> Telephone: +1-603-5744889