Thanks, Donna. I've updated the flow chart (see attached) in relation to your comments on pages 1, 2 and 4 which I believe are minor changes and in line what was discussed in Frankfurt (on page 4, I changed 'prepare' to 'post' as I think that aligns with the intent of your comment?). In relation to your comments on page 5, those sound like details that may be better suited for the actual written proposal and not necessarily the flow chart? I've posted those comments here below so that it may be easier for others to review and comment. Best regards, Marika Page 5 - Entering into Contract (Transition) - Comments from Donna Austin: * Can we confirm that what we mean by commence the contracting process includes the development of a contract or agreement to replace the existing arrangement between ICANN and NTIA. We should be explicit. * I'd like to see a step in here that has the Review Team review the current contract IANA Functions contract as a starting point -- commencing community consultations seems unguided. From: Donna Austin <Donna.Austin@ariservices.com<mailto:Donna.Austin@ariservices.com>> Date: Thursday 20 November 2014 17:37 To: "cwg-stewardship@icann.org<mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org>" <cwg-stewardship@icann.org<mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org>> Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] Comments on IANA Transition Flow Chart All I have a few comments on the IANA Transition Flow Chart that I've attached here for consideration. Thanks, Donna [Description: Description: Description: ARI Logo]DONNA AUSTIN Policy and Industry Affairs Manager ARI REGISTRY SERVICES Melbourne|Los Angeles P +1 310 890 9655 P +61 3 9866 3710 E donna.austin@ariservices.com<mailto:donna.austin@ariservices.com> W www.ariservices.com<http://www.ariservices.com/> Follow us on Twitter<https://twitter.com/ARIservices> The information contained in this communication is intended for the named recipients only. It is subject to copyright and may contain legally privileged and confidential information and if you are not an intended recipient you must not use, copy, distribute or take any action in reliance on it. If you have received this communication in error, please delete all copies from your system and notify us immediately. From: Donna Austin Sent: Thursday, 20 November 2014 5:31 PM To: Marika Konings (marika.konings@icann.org<mailto:marika.konings@icann.org>) Cc: Bernard Turcotte (turcotte.bernard@gmail.com<mailto:turcotte.bernard@gmail.com>); Bart Boswinkel (bart.boswinkel@icann.org<mailto:bart.boswinkel@icann.org>) Subject: Marika I've made some comments on the attached. Let me know if you can't access the comments. Thanks Donna
