Dear all, Merci Sébastien, Danke sehr, Erich! I have incorporated your excellent suggestions in the attached version. Best, Yrjö ________________________________ From: Schweighofer Erich <erich.schweighofer@univie.ac.at> Sent: Wednesday, September 21, 2016 5:44 AM To: Sébastien Bachollet; Yrjö Länsipuro; ocl@gih.com; wolf.ludwig@comunica-ch.net; staff@atlarge.icann.org Cc: EURALO Task Force on ALS Engagement Subject: AW: [euralo-tf-als-engagement] Shorter version of the message to ALS's Dear all, nice, only one thought: after much description, we get quite direct in the last paragraph. Should we write this in a more "Viennese style", with conjunctive and polite words? Best, Erich Von: euralo-tf-als-engagement-bounces@atlarge-lists.icann.org [mailto:euralo-tf-als-engagement-bounces@atlarge-lists.icann.org] Im Auftrag von Sébastien Bachollet Gesendet: Dienstag, 20. September 2016 22:51 An: Yrjö Länsipuro; ocl@gih.com; wolf.ludwig@comunica-ch.net; staff@atlarge.icann.org Cc: EURALO Task Force on ALS Engagement Betreff: Re: [euralo-tf-als-engagement] Shorter version of the message to ALS's Dear all, Please find attached the doc with my suggestions. All the best SeB Skills are useful but diversity is essential. Sébastien Bachollet +33 6 07 66 89 33 Blog: http://sebastien.bachollet.fr/ Le blog de Sébastien Bachollet - Un site utilisant WordPress<http://sebastien.bachollet.fr/> sebastien.bachollet.fr I would like to underline some of them. First, a point about the way we organized the debate here in Singapore. Stakeholders should have been able to interact on an ... Mail: Sébastien Bachollet <sebastien@bachollet.com<mailto:sebastien@bachollet.com>> De : <euralo-tf-als-engagement-bounces@atlarge-lists.icann.org<mailto:euralo-tf-als-engagement-bounces@atlarge-lists.icann.org>> on behalf of Yrjö Länsipuro <yrjo_lansipuro@hotmail.com<mailto:yrjo_lansipuro@hotmail.com>> Date : mercredi 14 septembre 2016 14:01 À : Olivier Crépin-Leblond <ocl@gih.com<mailto:ocl@gih.com>>, Wolf Ludwig <wolf.ludwig@comunica-ch.net<mailto:wolf.ludwig@comunica-ch.net>>, "staff@atlarge.icann.org<mailto:staff@atlarge.icann.org>" <staff@atlarge.icann.org<mailto:staff@atlarge.icann.org>> Cc : EURALO Task Force on ALS Engagement <euralo-tf-als-engagement@atlarge-lists.icann.org<mailto:euralo-tf-als-engagement@atlarge-lists.icann.org>> Objet : [euralo-tf-als-engagement] Shorter version of the message to ALS's Dear all, As promised at yesterday's call, attached please find an edited-down version of the message to EURALO ALS's, to be signed be Olivier. I hope the staff can use a suitable mail-merge program to generate individualized messages to each ALS. Best, Yrjö _______________________________________________ euralo-tf-als-engagement mailing list euralo-tf-als-engagement@atlarge-lists.icann.org<mailto:euralo-tf-als-engagement@atlarge-lists.icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/euralo-tf-als-engagement