Amy, regarding the discussion document, I believe your comment AB10 in 4.1.2 is now moot because in 4.1.1 we have proposed to define "actioned" by reference to 4.2 (disclosure) and 4.3 (customer notification). Also I assume PSWG will be provided with a redline version as well so that it is easy to see what changes we are proposing. Otherwise looks good to me! Thanks for rapid turnaround. Steve [image001] Steven J. Metalitz | Partner, through his professional corporation T: 202.355.7902 | met@msk.com<mailto:met@msk.com> Mitchell Silberberg & Knupp LLP | www.msk.com<http://www.msk.com/> 1818 N Street NW, 8th Floor, Washington, DC 20036 THE INFORMATION CONTAINED IN THIS E-MAIL MESSAGE IS INTENDED ONLY FOR THE PERSONAL AND CONFIDENTIAL USE OF THE DESIGNATED RECIPIENTS. THIS MESSAGE MAY BE AN ATTORNEY-CLIENT COMMUNICATION, AND AS SUCH IS PRIVILEGED AND CONFIDENTIAL. IF THE READER OF THIS MESSAGE IS NOT AN INTENDED RECIPIENT, YOU ARE HEREBY NOTIFIED THAT ANY REVIEW, USE, DISSEMINATION, FORWARDING OR COPYING OF THIS MESSAGE IS STRICTLY PROHIBITED. PLEASE NOTIFY US IMMEDIATELY BY REPLY E-MAIL OR TELEPHONE, AND DELETE THE ORIGINAL MESSAGE AND ALL ATTACHMENTS FROM YOUR SYSTEM. THANK YOU. From: gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl-bounces@icann.org [mailto:gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Amy Bivins Sent: Tuesday, June 20, 2017 11:42 AM To: gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl@icann.org Subject: [Gdd-gnso-ppsai-impl] [Action Required by EOD Wednesday] last call for input on PSWG proposal, labeling/escrow poll Dear Colleagues, Thank you for your active participation on the Privacy/Proxy IRT call today. As mentioned on the call, please provide any final feedback on the PSWG discussion document (for distribution to the PSWG on Thursday for discussion at ICANN59) no later than your EOD tomorrow, Wednesday, 21 June. The draft document is attached. Per our discussion on RDDS labeling, please complete the linked poll no later than your EOD Thursday, https://www.surveymonkey.com/r/WZRFV3P. Your answers on the labeling questions will be used to finalize the draft specification for the first discussion draft of the PPAA, which the IRT is expected to begin reviewing in July. The poll also includes two questions related to data escrow. These questions are intended to solicit initial IRT opinions only, as this topic will be discussed again in more detail on a future IRT call (likely in early July). Safe travels to all of you who are traveling to ICANN59, and I hope you all have a great rest of your week. Best, Amy Amy E. Bivins Registrar Services and Engagement Senior Manager Registrar Services and Industry Relations Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) Direct: +1 (202) 249-7551 Fax: +1 (202) 789-0104 Email: amy.bivins@icann.org<mailto:amy.bivins@icann.org> www.icann.org<http://www.icann.org>