Thanks Steve. Mark, all, I included 2 language-related edits and 1 additional element to question 4 which is related to what I brought up at our call. Other than those, I'm good with the copy. Kind regards, Justine On Fri, 8 Apr 2022 at 04:34, Mark Datysgeld <mark@governanceprimer.com> wrote:
Steve,
In my view, this revision addresses all concerns raised during the call.
Best, On 04/07/2022 16:49, Steve Chan wrote:
Dear All,
Staff attempted to revise the inquiry to Contractual Compliance based on the previous discussion. You can see the suggested changes in the Google doc here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KOaF0cc-hpGeQc3rrbe16jRjGew2FuiG/edit?us...
As was agreed on the call, please raise any suggestions or concerns you might have no later than 23:59 UTC on Friday, 8 April 2022. If any suggested changes are substantive, I would suggest they be raised on list. If there are minor edits, please go ahead and just suggest in the Google doc directly.
Best,
Steve
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