I agree with Sarah, looks good. The updates make it easier to read and follow. Best, Marc From: GNSO-EPDPP2-SmallTeam <gnso-epdpp2-smallteam-bounces@icann.org> On Behalf Of Sarah Wyld Sent: Tuesday, August 22, 2023 8:30 AM To: Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org>; gnso-epdpp2-smallteam@icann.org Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [GNSO-EPDPP2-SmallTeam] For final review - proposed RDRS StandingCommittee Charter Caution: This email originated from outside the organization. Do not click links or open attachments unless you recognize the sender and know the content is safe. Looks good! -- Sarah Wyld, CIPP/E Policy & Privacy Manager Pronouns: she/they swyld@tucows.com<mailto:swyld@tucows.com> From: Marika Konings<mailto:marika.konings@icann.org> Sent: August 22, 2023 6:24 AM To: gnso-epdpp2-smallteam@icann.org<mailto:gnso-epdpp2-smallteam@icann.org> Subject: [GNSO-EPDPP2-SmallTeam] For final review - proposed RDRS StandingCommittee Charter Dear All, As no further feedback was received on the proposed RDRS Standing Committee Charter, we have gone ahead and reorganized the assignment numbering as suggested by Sarah (see https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IFmCY1xEtWy7IoyM-uSYiRkzFkc0jLdM/edit). In addition, we’ve suggested updated language in the deliverable section in response to a comment from Marc. Please have a final look to see if there is anything further that needs to be reviewed or considered. The aim is to submit this to the GNSO Council in time for consideration during its September meeting (document deadline: 11 September). Best regards, Caitlin & Marika