Hello Paul and George, thank you - staff is generating a redline of George's suggestions that we will send to the list today. Best regards, Mary & Steve On 6/20/18, 07:23, "Gnso-igo-ingo-crp on behalf of Paul Keating" <gnso-igo-ingo-crp-bounces@icann.org on behalf of paul@law.es> wrote: If u send me the original and your changed version (without your manual redlines etc but with formatting) i can generate a redline using the compare feature of word. Sincerely, Paul Keating, Esq. > On Jun 20, 2018, at 2:25 AM, George Kirikos <icann@leap.com> wrote: > > Hi folks, > > During the last call, Phil suggested a redline of proposed changes > would be desirable. I don't own software of my own that does this. I > also searched for online tools that do this, but couldn't find > anything suitable. But, I did attempt to create such "redline" text > manually, and it's attached as a PDP. > > I started with Recommendation 2, since that was the 'easiest' (i.e. > adding 4 words, to restrict things definitively to "trademark and > service mark" rights). > > For Recommendation 1, I reordered and rephrased the existing > recommendation slightly, for clarity. I also added the text that I > thought should be in a recommendation that no specific new DRP be > created for IGOs. > > Since some would rather keep Recommendation 1 limited only to INGOs, I > then offered an alternative, namely adding it into Recommendation 3 > instead. > > Also, I'm not sure if folks noticed, but some text was deleted from > Recommendation 3, compared to what appeared in January 2017. I pointed > out phrases that we might want to put back, for clarity. > > I also found a possible error in how Recommendation 3 was worded, > relative to the comparable text from January 2017. Back in January > 2017, there was some text after a semi-colon (i.e. a separate > thought), that somehow got merged now into the prior text, without any > semi-colon. So, it doesn't make sense anymore to me. This stuff was > non-controversial (i.e. the assignee, licensee, agent procedural > guidance), but it kind of got mixed up with other text that was after > the semi-colon. > > Sincerely, > > George Kirikos > 416-588-0266 > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=http-3A__www.leap.com_&d=DwICAg&c... > <suggested-text-igo-pdp-20180619.pdf> > _______________________________________________ > Gnso-igo-ingo-crp mailing list > Gnso-igo-ingo-crp@icann.org > https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-igo-ingo-crp _______________________________________________ Gnso-igo-ingo-crp mailing list Gnso-igo-ingo-crp@icann.org https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-igo-ingo-crp