Dear Émilien Pls delete negative as we have already “ probkem”and does not need double negative Kavouss Sent from my iPhone
On 30 Nov 2018, at 14:36, Emily Barabas <emily.barabas@icann.org> wrote:
Dear Kavouss,
The sentence currently reads: “Some of the problems and negative experiences that some Work Track members identified from the 2012 round include the following. Some believe that. . .”
Is this phrasing more clear: “Some Work Track members identified problems and negative experiences from the 2012 round. Some believe that. . .”?
Note that there is also a sub-section in the text that describes positive experiences.
Kind regards, Emily
From: Arasteh <kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com> Date: Friday, 30 November 2018 at 12:45 To: Annebeth Lange <annebeth.lange@norid.no> Cc: Emily Barabas <emily.barabas@icann.org>, "gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5@icann.org" <gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5] [Ext] AW: Proposed Agenda - Work Track 5 - 28 November 2018 at 20:00 UTC
Dear All I agree with the first ( para. 12) but I have difficulty with paragraph 42not due to the addition on some proposed by Jorge but on the very awkward structure of the sentence It needs to be redrafted including suggestion made by Jorge In fact U gave difficulties to grasp “ negative experience”as experience usually is not associated with adjective such as positive or negative due to the fact that the use of such adjective is purely subjective . Regards Kavouss
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On 30 Nov 2018, at 08:52, Annebeth Lange <annebeth.lange@norid.no> wrote:
Hi all
I have no strong objections to this. Actually, it is important to highlight it when it is only «some», so it does not seem like it is a view the whole group shares.
Best regards, Annebeth
Annebeth B Lange Special Adviser International Policy UNINETT Norid AS Phone: +47 959 11 559 Mail: annebeth.lange@norid.no
29. nov. 2018 kl. 22:00 skrev Emily Barabas <emily.barabas@icann.org>:
Dear all,
It appears that we neglected to walk through these new comments from Jorge on the call yesterday. If there are any strong objections to the following, please respond on list by 21:00 UTC tomorrow, 30 November:
On page 12, remove sentence “Treatment of these strings was inconsistent.” On page 42, add the word “some” to the sentence referenced below.
Kind regards, Emily
From: "Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch" <Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch> Date: Wednesday, 28 November 2018 at 11:42 To: Emily Barabas <emily.barabas@icann.org>, "gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5@icann.org" <gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5@icann.org> Subject: [Ext] AW: [Gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5] Proposed Agenda - Work Track 5 - 28 November 2018 at 20:00 UTC
Dear Emily
Please include the following comments in the consideration:
Page 12: “Treatment of these strings was inconsistent.” à this is just the opinion expressed (as far as I know) by one member. “inconsistent” is a value call. We could say that there were different treatments – whether that differentiation was inconsistent or not has not been agreed.
Page 42: the following heading/intro seems to reflect an agreed view, when it is only the view of “some”, hence it should read “Some of the issues problems and negative experiences that some Work Track members identified from the 2012 round include the following.”
Best regards
Jorge
Von: Gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5 <gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5-bounces@icann.org> Im Auftrag von Emily Barabas Gesendet: Dienstag, 27. November 2018 20:52 An: gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5@icann.org Betreff: [Gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5] Proposed Agenda - Work Track 5 - 28 November 2018 at 20:00 UTC
Dear all,
Please find below the proposed agenda for the Work Track 5 call taking place tomorrow 28 November 2018 at 20:00 UTC for 90 mins.
Welcome/Agenda Review/SOI Updates Initial Report – Outstanding Items AOB Additional information request – Geographic Names Panel
Please find attached the latest version of the draft Initial Report. This version incorporates new feedback received in the last week. New comments are highlighted in either blue or yellow. For those highlighted in blue, the resolution was relatively straightforward and staff has proposed edits. Comments in yellow require additional input and will be discussed on the call tomorrow.
Kind regards, Emily
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