Hi Kristina, Thank you very much for these helpful and detailed edits. Based on our review they all very clear and we don’t have any questions. We will integrate them. Kind regards, Julie From: Gnso-newgtld-wg <gnso-newgtld-wg-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of "Rosette, Kristina via Gnso-newgtld-wg" <gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org> Reply-To: "Rosette, Kristina" <rosettek@amazon.com> Date: Thursday, June 28, 2018 at 3:11 PM To: Steve Chan <steve.chan@icann.org>, "gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org" <gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-newgtld-wg] - Initial Report Excerpts Red-lines and Updated Preamble With the caveat that I may have missed something (and, in that case, my comments on the transcript take precedence), attached and copied below is a chart of my redline comments. SectionComment 2.2.2.2.e.1 (Clarity of Application Process)Change question to: Is ICANN organization capable of scaling to handle application volume and, if not, what would have to happen in order for ICANN organization to scale? 2.2.4.e, bullet 1 (Different TLD Types)Add as last sentence to bullet: If so, which categories 2.2.4.f (Different TLD Types)Change last word in “validated registry” bullet from verified to validated 2.2.6.f (Accreditation Programs)Change “A new RSP must be evaluated prior to the ultimate selection of the Applicant to manage one or more specific TLDs.” to “A new RSP must be evaluated before the Applicant signs the Registry Agreement for the applied-for TLD(s).” 2.5.1.e, bullet 1 (Application Fees)Drop footnote to define “warehousing” and “squatting” Fn 219Suggest deleting the link to my letter to John Jeffrey. (Link to decision in IO Community Objection against .AMAZON applications already included) K From: Gnso-newgtld-wg [mailto:gnso-newgtld-wg-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Steve Chan Sent: Wednesday, June 20, 2018 12:30 AM To: gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org Subject: [Gnso-newgtld-wg] - Initial Report Excerpts Red-lines and Updated Preamble Dear WG Members, As noted by Jeff a short while ago, the red-lined excerpts have all been made available on the Wiki here: https://community.icann.org/x/NwUhB. On this page, you will a full set of red-lined excerpts, all sections in a single document. You will also find extracts of each section as well. All of these documents are available in Word and PDF. Included as well on this page is the latest version of the remaining elements of the Initial Report, which includes edits suggested by WG members to the Preamble. The next steps from the staff side are to complete some of the remaining elements in the Initial Report, as well as to begin integrating the excerpts into the report. If you have any questions, please do let us know. Best, Steve, Emily, and Julie Steven Chan Policy Director, GNSO Support ICANN 12025 Waterfront Drive, Suite 300 Los Angeles, CA 90094-2536 steve.chan@icann.org mobile: +1.310.339.4410 office tel: +1.310.301.5800 office fax: +1.310.823.8649 Find out more about the GNSO by taking our interactive courses and visiting the GNSO Newcomer pages. Follow @GNSO on Twitter: https://twitter.com/ICANN_GNSO Follow the GNSO on Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/icanngnso/ http://gnso.icann.org/en/