Hello everyone, As a follow up to the Sub Team meeting and Action Items noted by Amr (below), please find attached the requested “reverse redline” of the Nevett-Payne version of the original Additional Marketplace RPMs questions. What we have done is re-inserted the questions that were proposed for deletion, but with highlighting in grey and a note about it being a “proposal to delete”. We have also cleaned up the formatting for easier reading. Finally, we left in a couple of comments from Susan Payne that presumably the Sub Team will wish to discuss. We hope this “reverse redline” is helpful. To the extent you wish to compare this version with the originals, Amr has just sent out an email attaching the two earlier versions (the original co-chairs’ proposal and the initial Nevett-Payne version), and all three documents can now also be found on the Sub Team wiki space: https://community.icann.org/x/UU3wAw. Thanks and cheers Mary From: <gnso-rpm-protection-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Amr Elsadr <amr.elsadr@icann.org> Date: Friday, June 16, 2017 at 03:13 To: "gnso-rpm-protection@icann.org" <gnso-rpm-protection@icann.org> Subject: [Gnso-rpm-protection] Action Items from the Additional Marketplace RPMs Sub Team Call - 14 June 2017 Dear Sub Team Members, Below are the Action Items from yesterday’s Sub Team call. The Action Items, notes, recordings/transcripts and meeting documents are posted on the Sub Team meeting’s wiki page here: https://community.icann.org/x/UU3wAw[community.icann.org]<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__community.icann.org_x_UU3wAw&d=DwMGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=DJ69mAe-idEhpAMF1nu2x6c2w3xl7xb5cjS_7sB4h6Y&m=NgbPNrDPG7u8kNqJCtghm-gub2n9tnw9u0OI0HX8XgM&s=CQMCY3oqdd77Dzz45Cv5iQ-RCflQsxIwJjD7j09Qso8&e=>. Thanks. Amr Action Items: * Action Items for the Sub Team: * Sub Team to consider whether or not to include the previous language proposed by the Co-Chairs (reverse redline), as well as any other questions that may need to be added * Sub Team to consider how to refine question 1(a) on the mailing list * Steve Levy to propose an amendment to question 4 to address change of ownership of registry operators that provide Additional Marketplace RPMs (DONE) * Action Items for Staff: * Staff to add Roger Baah to the Sub Team membership (DONE) * Staff to create "reverse redline" list of Sub Team questions, where deleted text is shown as part of the main text (but marked as proposed for deletion)