Mary, Kathy and all, Thanks, Kathy for taking the first crack. I have a bunch of edits in the attached, but I tried to explain them all. In a few cases, I had to hunt through the RA to figure out what the original charter questions were referring to. The second page is more redlined because that's where the examples of "solutions" were. I wanted to call out for the WG that these are NOT subteam-generated examples, but are right in the Charter Questions themselves. I strongly oppose adding our own examples to the charter questions. I also strongly think all pricing questions should be bundled/bunched. Let me know what you think. Best, Kristine -----Original Message----- From: gnso-rpm-sunrise-bounces@icann.org [mailto:gnso-rpm-sunrise-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Mary Wong Sent: Tuesday, May 30, 2017 8:41 AM To: Kathy Kleiman <kathy@kathykleiman.com>; gnso-rpm-sunrise@icann.org Subject: Re: [Gnso-rpm-sunrise] Sunrise Questions - bringing wide ranging views together. Thanks very much for taking this on, Kathy and Kristine, and for the updated list of questions. NOTE/QUESTION for Kathy, Kristine and Lori – since this new list is a significantly re-ordered and reworded version of the last Google Doc set of questions, I am not sure how it can easily be fitted into the Google Doc. Will it make more sense for the Sub Team to use this document for the Friday call, and for staff to compile the results of that discussion into a new table that compares the final wording and ordering with the original Charter questions? Thanks and cheers Mary On 5/29/17, 20:59, "gnso-rpm-sunrise-bounces@icann.org on behalf of Kathy Kleiman" <gnso-rpm-sunrise-bounces@icann.org on behalf of kathy@kathykleiman.com> wrote: Hi All, In lieu of our meeting on Friday, Kristine and I sat down by phone and worked through the Sunrise questions from a number of different perspectives. We covered as many of our our almost 2 dozen Sunrise questions as possible. We tried to keep, in as neutral as way as possible, the charter questions given to us by Council and the rewritten questions that bind together overarching concepts. We found two arcs we would like to suggest for the Sunrise questions: Arc 1) Trademark Owners and Registrant Issues and Arc 2) Trademark Owners and Registry Operator Issues. Everything seems to fall fairly neatly into those two categories. We replaced language that some members of the subteam objected to as confusing or meaning something else. I took the pen from there, and Kristine is still reviewing. In the interest of time, let me circulate these questions to the full subteam. Thoughts on next steps appreciated. Should we add these to the Wiki? Best, Kathy _______________________________________________ Gnso-rpm-sunrise mailing list Gnso-rpm-sunrise@icann.org https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-rpm-sunrise