Hi, I agree with Sarah. Another approach would be to number the topics and suggest a potential grouping in a table at the end of the doc. I believe Berry talked about 3 potential groups on our last call. Best tom Von: GNSO-TPRST <gnso-tprst-bounces@icann.org> im Auftrag von Sarah Wyld <swyld@tucows.com> Organisation: Tucows Datum: Dienstag, 31. März 2020 um 15:45 An: "gnso-tprst@icann.org" <gnso-tprst@icann.org> Betreff: Re: [GNSO-TPRST] For your review: draft scoping paper Thanks Berry and Caitlin for your work on this. I have added a few more tracked changes, sorry. Most of the changes are for clarity, things that were hard to see when we had the commented version in progress. I do note Tom's comment on the AuthInfo management<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sXxp5TsUskcrW444D6lYCLy6YX99Wyus/edit?di...> section and I think we would benefit from discussing that a bit. My assumption was that each row on the issues chart indicated a different topic and thus the bigger ones would be approached in individual PDPs, and it sounds like that's how Tom was reading it also, but Berry has explained that each row is a different policy topic but not necessarily a different PDP. I would propose that we do two things: 1, combine the FOA and AuthInfo rows into one topic (I think they're too intertwined to be separated) and 2, add a sentence to the paragraph immediately preceding the chart to explain that the rows may be combined depending on what the GNSO Council thinks makes sense. I think we could propose that some be approached together (maybe TEAC and TDRP?) also. What do you think? Thanks! -- Sarah Wyld Domains Product Team Tucows +1.416 535 0123 Ext. 1392 On 3/30/2020 10:49 PM, Caitlin Tubergen wrote: Dear Scoping Team Members: Further to Support Staff’s action to circulate a clean version of the Scoping Paper to the Team by COB today, please find the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sXxp5TsUskcrW444D6lYCLy6YX99Wyus/edit#<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sXxp5TsUskcrW444D6lYCLy6YX99Wyus/edit>. As a reminder, please provide additional and final edits by COB Thursday, 2 April. Support Staff will then incorporate the proposed edits and send the paper to the GNSO Council by Monday, 6 April. In addition, please remember to keep the your RrSG GNSO Councilors colleagues apprised of the Scoping Team's progress. Thank you. Best regards, Berry and Caitlin _______________________________________________ GNSO-TPRST mailing list GNSO-TPRST@icann.org<mailto:GNSO-TPRST@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-tprst