Please see revised section 2.1.5. It is much shorter and hopefully clearer. The only clear obligation is to publish updated registration policies. I'm not aware of any objections to that particular requirement. Note that the auto numbering in the doc has experienced a critical failure and the updated section now has "1." in front of it. I've also left a comment for what was section 2.1.5.e (now auto-numbered: 'b'). Since this section refers to IDNA2008 transition specifically, I think it should be added to 2.1.3. Kal Feher Neustar Inc. / Enterprise Architect Level 8, 10 Queens Road, Melbourne, Australia VIC 3004 Office +61 3 9866 3710 / kal.feher@neustar.biz<mailto:kal.feher@neustar.biz> / www.neustar.biz<http://www.neustar.biz/> Follow Neustar: [http://neunet.neustar.biz/sites/default/files/295/New%20Picture.png] Facebook<http://www.facebook.com/neustarinc> [http://neunet.neustar.biz/sites/default/files/295/New%20Picture%20(1)(1).png] LinkedIn<http://www.linkedin.com/company/5349> [http://neunet.neustar.biz/sites/default/files/295/New%20Picture%20(2).png] Twitter<http://www.twitter.com/neustarinc> ________________________________ The information contained in this e-mail message is intended only for the use of the recipient(s) named above and may contain confidential and/or privileged information. If you are not the intended recipient you have received this e-mail message in error and any review, dissemination, distribution, or copying of this message is strictly prohibited. If you have received this communication in error, please notify us immediately and delete the original message. From: <idngwg-bounces@icann.org<mailto:idngwg-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of Sarmad Hussain <sarmad.hussain@icann.org<mailto:sarmad.hussain@icann.org>> Date: Thursday, 10 August 2017 at 06:30 To: "idngwg@icann.org<mailto:idngwg@icann.org>" <idngwg@icann.org<mailto:idngwg@icann.org>> Subject: [EXTERNAL] [Idngwg] Summary of IDNGWG meeting on 3 August 2017 Dear IDNGWG members, Please find attached the summary of the meeting of the IDNGWG held on 3 August 2017. Please let me know if you would like to suggest any edits or additions. Action Items S. No. Action Items Owner 1 Shrink Recommendation 5 without changing the contents KF 2 Revise the text for Recommendation 7 with a placeholder of number of months for transition, applicable to part (a) SH 3 Redraft the sentence on references in Recommendation 11 as discussed EC The recording and this summary are also posted at the IDNGWG wiki page at https://community.icann.org/display/IDN/IDN+Implementation+Guidelines<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__community.icann.org_display_IDN_IDN-2BImplementation-2BGuidelines&d=DwMFAg&c=MOptNlVtIETeDALC_lULrw&r=_-v0M-gLiqWrtaHtP66hjSPyu3ePgw9YIihGxxybjqU&m=c62RCWGW9N2w-jEkWW1w_hu3DyPLvmz3cQsw18xPuGY&s=XVppKWutUu2tVvYmb8r3COCgN2woOS9DQlYDUud6q90&e=>. Regards, Sarmad