Thanks Russ. I made these changes, with some slight wordsmithing (administration of registries containing … registry management — didn’t quite make sense). Alissa On Oct 12, 2014, at 2:21 PM, Russ Mundy <mundy@tislabs.com> wrote:
Alissa,
Just to be more consistent with the wording and ordering of the functions in the Contract, let me suggest the following words on slide 4:
IANA administration of registries containing: –DNS root zone –Internet numbering resources –Protocol parameters
Be changed to:
IANA activities and administration of registries containing: -Protocol Parameter Registry Management –DNS Root Zone Management -Internet Numbers Registry Management
If there is not enough time to make these changes, I'm okay with the current wording.
Russ
On Oct 9, 2014, at 5:07 PM, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:
I put together a few slides to use to provide an introduction to the ICG at our community discussion and other meetings at ICANN51. I’m not a big fan of words on slides, but there are some words on these slides. :) I stripped some of the detail from the timeline to make it presentable on slides, with the idea of using the timeline as a vehicle for explaining the proposal development process going forward. In the side meetings I will probably not use all of these since time is limited.
Alissa
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