Alissa, sorry for late reply. The slides are fine, but here are a few constructive suggestions. #2 could add here that ICG is working independently form ICANN? #3 for completeness, could show the number of delegates from each community #4 agree with making these consistent with other docs. #5 for consistency, specify that these are the “operational communities”? also, at risk of adding more words, could possibly have slides for: - ICG charter - summary of the RFP process - process of developing single proposal from RFP responses Paul ________________________________________________________________________ Paul Wilson, Director-General, APNIC <dg@apnic.net> http://www.apnic.net +61 7 3858 3100 On 10 Oct 2014, at 10:07 am, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:
I put together a few slides to use to provide an introduction to the ICG at our community discussion and other meetings at ICANN51. I’m not a big fan of words on slides, but there are some words on these slides. :) I stripped some of the detail from the timeline to make it presentable on slides, with the idea of using the timeline as a vehicle for explaining the proposal development process going forward. In the side meetings I will probably not use all of these since time is limited.
Alissa
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