July 18, 2014
8:34 a.m.
I’m sorry for the crossing e-mails. I believe my e-mail that started this thread contained a version where we had addressed everything that we had heard by that time. There are two exceptions: 1) There was e-mail discussion about the word “legitimate” that has not been acted upon. The group needs to make a decision, but I think based on e-mail discussion that was pretty obvious. 2) We’ve had discussion with Joe about introductory paragraph(s) and balancing of the text between the three communities and others. I talked to Joe and Alissa before the meeting, and I think we all agree on the goals, but some further tuning of the text is needed. Hope this clarifies. Jari