Thanks Alissa for your work on this. I’m sure we could continue word-smithing this for a long time, and I’m happy to go. Kavouss’s comment on light: I like the term as it reminds everyone that we are not planning to play the autocrats. But if non-native English speakers find the meaning obscure I’m ok without. Cheers Martin From: internal-cg-bounces@icann.org [mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Kavouss Arasteh Sent: 29 August 2014 13:32 To: Daniel Karrenberg Cc: Coordination Group Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] RFP - publishable draft? Dear Alissa, Dear All, I suggest some small amendments to make various parts of the text consistent with each other See attachment Kavouss the l 2014-08-29 13:37 GMT+02:00 Daniel Karrenberg <daniel.karrenberg@ripe.net<mailto:daniel.karrenberg@ripe.net>>: On 28.08.14 23:36 , Alissa Cooper wrote:
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Are there any objections to publishing this as a draft (and having the secretariat host it on our web site and make an announcement about its existence) by Sept 1? I support publishing this as a daft with Elise's corrections.
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