Last week we had some mailing list discussion about a blog post I could write to provide an update about timing, next steps, and our perspective of the process to date. Attached and in Dropbox <https://www.dropbox.com/home/CoordinationGroup/January%202015%20blog%20post> is a draft. Please send feedback to the list. It would be great to get this posted early next week. Given the blog format, I took a few liberties with the language and tone — there is a little (attempted) humor in there. Alissa
Hi Alissa: Great article. I added "and organizations" to the first sentence of the second paragraph ("...global community of individuals and organizations..."). Also, there appear to be two typos w.r.t "decision making" in the second to last paragraph. Please feel free to use or jettison these changes. Otherwise, looks great! Thanks- J. From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in<mailto:alissa@cooperw.in>> Date: Friday, January 16, 2015 at 6:49 To: ICG List <internal-cg@icann.org<mailto:internal-cg@icann.org>> Subject: [Internal-cg] Blog post Last week we had some mailing list discussion about a blog post I could write to provide an update about timing, next steps, and our perspective of the process to date. Attached and in Dropbox <https://www.dropbox.com/home/CoordinationGroup/January%202015%20blog%20post> is a draft. Please send feedback to the list. It would be great to get this posted early next week. Given the blog format, I took a few liberties with the language and tone - there is a little (attempted) humor in there. Alissa
Hi Alissa, very good article. My comments were so few that I simply included them here and did not update the document itself. They are of course only suggestions as this is your blog... - 1st para - suggest replacing "community consensus" with "the consensus of their communities" to make it even more clear that these processes live in the respective communities. - 5th para. - nit. for completeness: add NTIA to Larry's title. - 3rd para. from the end - current sentence reads: "Thus, the assembly and finalization process has many built-in checks to ensure that the final plan is of the highest quality, addresses feedback from anyone who chooses to provide it, and represents community consensus." Suggest deleting: "from anyone who chooses to provide it" as this could be confusing (or over inviting) - Penultimate para. - consider replacing "askance" with "with surprise" -- surely these types of M/S processes are no longer so foreign, even if not universally applauded :-). Again, the blog is very good. Thanks much for doing this. Lynn On Jan 16, 2015, at 12:49 AM, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:
Last week we had some mailing list discussion about a blog post I could write to provide an update about timing, next steps, and our perspective of the process to date. Attached and in Dropbox <https://www.dropbox.com/home/CoordinationGroup/January%202015%20blog%20post> is a draft. Please send feedback to the list. It would be great to get this posted early next week.
Given the blog format, I took a few liberties with the language and tone — there is a little (attempted) humor in there.
Alissa
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Blog looks fine to me. I would however advise you to find another adjective than "fulsome" to describe the debate. The primary meaning of this term is "extravagant, excessive, overdone," etc. We wouldn't want to say that about the IANA transition debate, now would we?
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Hi Alissa,
very good article. My comments were so few that I simply included them here and did not update the document itself. They are of course only suggestions as this is your blog...
- 1st para - suggest replacing "community consensus" with "the consensus of their communities" to make it even more clear that these processes live in the respective communities.
- 5th para. - nit. for completeness: add NTIA to Larry's title.
- 3rd para. from the end - current sentence reads: "Thus, the assembly and finalization process has many built-in checks to ensure that the final plan is of the highest quality, addresses feedback from anyone who chooses to provide it, and represents community consensus." Suggest deleting: "from anyone who chooses to provide it" as this could be confusing (or over inviting)
- Penultimate para. - consider replacing "askance" with "with surprise" -- surely these types of M/S processes are no longer so foreign, even if not universally applauded :-).
Again, the blog is very good.
Thanks much for doing this.
Lynn
On Jan 16, 2015, at 12:49 AM, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:
Last week we had some mailing list discussion about a blog post I could write to provide an update about timing, next steps, and our perspective of the process to date. Attached and in Dropbox <https://www.dropbox.com/home/CoordinationGroup/January%202 015%20blog%20post> is a draft. Please send feedback to the list. It would be great to get this posted early next week.
Given the blog format, I took a few liberties with the language and tone - there is a little (attempted) humor in there.
Alissa
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Thank you Lynn and Milton for explaining words that would have been too tough for me to comprehend. I support blog post. Thank you Alissa for great job. Mary Uduma Sent from my BlackBerry wireless device from MTN -----Original Message----- From: Milton L Mueller <mueller@syr.edu> Sender: internal-cg-bounces@icann.org Date: Mon, 19 Jan 2015 16:13:51 To: 'Lynn St.Amour'<Lynn@lstamour.org>; 'Alissa Cooper'<alissa@cooperw.in> Cc: 'ICG'<internal-cg@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Blog post Blog looks fine to me. I would however advise you to find another adjective than "fulsome" to describe the debate. The primary meaning of this term is "extravagant, excessive, overdone," etc. We wouldn't want to say that about the IANA transition debate, now would we?
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Hi Alissa,
very good article. My comments were so few that I simply included them here and did not update the document itself. They are of course only suggestions as this is your blog...
- 1st para - suggest replacing "community consensus" with "the consensus of their communities" to make it even more clear that these processes live in the respective communities.
- 5th para. - nit. for completeness: add NTIA to Larry's title.
- 3rd para. from the end - current sentence reads: "Thus, the assembly and finalization process has many built-in checks to ensure that the final plan is of the highest quality, addresses feedback from anyone who chooses to provide it, and represents community consensus." Suggest deleting: "from anyone who chooses to provide it" as this could be confusing (or over inviting)
- Penultimate para. - consider replacing "askance" with "with surprise" -- surely these types of M/S processes are no longer so foreign, even if not universally applauded :-).
Again, the blog is very good.
Thanks much for doing this.
Lynn
On Jan 16, 2015, at 12:49 AM, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:
Last week we had some mailing list discussion about a blog post I could write to provide an update about timing, next steps, and our perspective of the process to date. Attached and in Dropbox <https://www.dropbox.com/home/CoordinationGroup/January%202 015%20blog%20post> is a draft. Please send feedback to the list. It would be great to get this posted early next week.
Given the blog format, I took a few liberties with the language and tone - there is a little (attempted) humor in there.
Alissa
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This is really excellent, thanks Alissa. I must only take exception to the reference to "winter holiday vacations”, for obvious reasons. :-) Paul. ________________________________________________________________________ Paul Wilson, Director-General, APNIC <dg@apnic.net> http://www.apnic.net +61 7 3858 3100 On 16 Jan 2015, at 3:49 pm, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:
Last week we had some mailing list discussion about a blog post I could write to provide an update about timing, next steps, and our perspective of the process to date. Attached and in Dropbox <https://www.dropbox.com/home/CoordinationGroup/January%202015%20blog%20post> is a draft. Please send feedback to the list. It would be great to get this posted early next week.
Given the blog format, I took a few liberties with the language and tone — there is a little (attempted) humor in there.
Alissa
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Thanks very much Alissa, I'm sure this will keep the motivation level high. Best regards Wolf-Ulrich On 16 Jan 2015, at 3:49 pm, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:
Last week we had some mailing list discussion about a blog post I could write to provide an update about timing, next steps, and our perspective of the process to date. Attached and in Dropbox <https://www.dropbox.com/home/CoordinationGroup/January%202015%20blog%20post> is a draft. Please send feedback to the list. It would be great to get this posted early next week.
Given the blog format, I took a few liberties with the language and tone — there is a little (attempted) humor in there.
Alissa
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Great article Alissa. I also support the suggested edits provided so far by Lynn, Paul and Milton. thanks. - a. On Jan 16, 2015, at 09:49 AM, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:
Last week we had some mailing list discussion about a blog post I could write to provide an update about timing, next steps, and our perspective of the process to date. Attached and in Dropbox <https://www.dropbox.com/home/CoordinationGroup/January%202015%20blog%20post> is a draft. Please send feedback to the list. It would be great to get this posted early next week.
Given the blog format, I took a few liberties with the language and tone — there is a little (attempted) humor in there.
Alissa
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article looks good, I haven't had a chance to track interim comments, the only suggestion would be when referencing the names group and the progress they are making we may more explicitly state that we are working with them to flexibly address timing issues? I think you should get it out as soon as practicable... On 1/20/2015 8:08 AM, Adiel Akplogan wrote:
Great article Alissa. I also support the suggested edits provided so far by Lynn, Paul and Milton.
thanks.
- a.
On Jan 16, 2015, at 09:49 AM, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:
Last week we had some mailing list discussion about a blog post I could write to provide an update about timing, next steps, and our perspective of the process to date. Attached and in Dropbox <https://www.dropbox.com/home/CoordinationGroup/January%202015%20blog%20post> is a draft. Please send feedback to the list. It would be great to get this posted early next week.
Given the blog format, I took a few liberties with the language and tone — there is a little (attempted) humor in there.
Alissa
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Thanks to everyone for the comments. I will incorporate edits and aim to get this posted on Jan 21. Alissa On Jan 20, 2015, at 5:15 AM, joseph alhadeff <joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com> wrote:
article looks good, I haven't had a chance to track interim comments, the only suggestion would be when referencing the names group and the progress they are making we may more explicitly state that we are working with them to flexibly address timing issues? I think you should get it out as soon as practicable... On 1/20/2015 8:08 AM, Adiel Akplogan wrote:
Great article Alissa. I also support the suggested edits provided so far by Lynn, Paul and Milton.
thanks.
- a.
On Jan 16, 2015, at 09:49 AM, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:
Last week we had some mailing list discussion about a blog post I could write to provide an update about timing, next steps, and our perspective of the process to date. Attached and in Dropbox <https://www.dropbox.com/home/CoordinationGroup/January%202015%20blog%20post> is a draft. Please send feedback to the list. It would be great to get this posted early next week.
Given the blog format, I took a few liberties with the language and tone — there is a little (attempted) humor in there.
Alissa
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Jennifer, Please have the attached version posted to the web site (it’s also on Dropbox: https://www.dropbox.com/s/jsle5n0xa6k14is/transition-planning-internet-style...). I’ve also posted it to CircleID and will send a link along when it appears. Thanks, Alissa On Jan 20, 2015, at 7:56 AM, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:
Thanks to everyone for the comments. I will incorporate edits and aim to get this posted on Jan 21.
Alissa
On Jan 20, 2015, at 5:15 AM, joseph alhadeff <joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com> wrote:
article looks good, I haven't had a chance to track interim comments, the only suggestion would be when referencing the names group and the progress they are making we may more explicitly state that we are working with them to flexibly address timing issues? I think you should get it out as soon as practicable... On 1/20/2015 8:08 AM, Adiel Akplogan wrote:
Great article Alissa. I also support the suggested edits provided so far by Lynn, Paul and Milton.
thanks.
- a.
On Jan 16, 2015, at 09:49 AM, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:
Last week we had some mailing list discussion about a blog post I could write to provide an update about timing, next steps, and our perspective of the process to date. Attached and in Dropbox <https://www.dropbox.com/home/CoordinationGroup/January%202015%20blog%20post> is a draft. Please send feedback to the list. It would be great to get this posted early next week.
Given the blog format, I took a few liberties with the language and tone — there is a little (attempted) humor in there.
Alissa
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CircleID link is here: http://www.circleid.com/posts/20150120_iana_transition_planning_proceeding_i... On Jan 20, 2015, at 10:34 PM, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:
Jennifer,
Please have the attached version posted to the web site (it’s also on Dropbox: https://www.dropbox.com/s/jsle5n0xa6k14is/transition-planning-internet-style...). I’ve also posted it to CircleID and will send a link along when it appears.
Thanks, Alissa
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On Jan 20, 2015, at 7:56 AM, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:
Thanks to everyone for the comments. I will incorporate edits and aim to get this posted on Jan 21.
Alissa
On Jan 20, 2015, at 5:15 AM, joseph alhadeff <joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com> wrote:
article looks good, I haven't had a chance to track interim comments, the only suggestion would be when referencing the names group and the progress they are making we may more explicitly state that we are working with them to flexibly address timing issues? I think you should get it out as soon as practicable... On 1/20/2015 8:08 AM, Adiel Akplogan wrote:
Great article Alissa. I also support the suggested edits provided so far by Lynn, Paul and Milton.
thanks.
- a.
On Jan 16, 2015, at 09:49 AM, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:
Last week we had some mailing list discussion about a blog post I could write to provide an update about timing, next steps, and our perspective of the process to date. Attached and in Dropbox <https://www.dropbox.com/home/CoordinationGroup/January%202015%20blog%20post> is a draft. Please send feedback to the list. It would be great to get this posted early next week.
Given the blog format, I took a few liberties with the language and tone — there is a little (attempted) humor in there.
Alissa
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Hi Alissa and all, The blog post is now linked on the following page, under its own section: https://www.icann.org/resources/pages/icg-activities-2014-07-18-en Best Regards, Jennifer From: Alissa Cooper [mailto:alissa@cooperw.in] Sent: Wednesday, January 21, 2015 8:09 AM To: Jennifer Chung Cc: ICG Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Blog post CircleID link is here: http://www.circleid.com/posts/20150120_iana_transition_planning_proceeding_i n_fine_internet_style/ On Jan 20, 2015, at 10:34 PM, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in <mailto:alissa@cooperw.in> > wrote: Jennifer, Please have the attached version posted to the web site (it's also on Dropbox: https://www.dropbox.com/s/jsle5n0xa6k14is/transition-planning-internet-style -01.docx?dl=0). I've also posted it to CircleID and will send a link along when it appears. Thanks, Alissa <transition-planning-internet-style-01.docx> On Jan 20, 2015, at 7:56 AM, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in <mailto:alissa@cooperw.in> > wrote: Thanks to everyone for the comments. I will incorporate edits and aim to get this posted on Jan 21. Alissa On Jan 20, 2015, at 5:15 AM, joseph alhadeff <joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com <mailto:joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com> > wrote: article looks good, I haven't had a chance to track interim comments, the only suggestion would be when referencing the names group and the progress they are making we may more explicitly state that we are working with them to flexibly address timing issues? I think you should get it out as soon as practicable... On 1/20/2015 8:08 AM, Adiel Akplogan wrote: Great article Alissa. I also support the suggested edits provided so far by Lynn, Paul and Milton. thanks. - a. On Jan 16, 2015, at 09:49 AM, Alissa Cooper <mailto:alissa@cooperw.in> <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote: Last week we had some mailing list discussion about a blog post I could write to provide an update about timing, next steps, and our perspective of the process to date. Attached and in Dropbox <https://www.dropbox.com/home/CoordinationGroup/January%202015%20blog%20post
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The updated blog post <transition-planning-internet-style-01.docx> looks great. Thanks. Russ On Jan 16, 2015, at 09:49 AM, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:
Last week we had some mailing list discussion about a blog post I could write to provide an update about timing, next steps, and our perspective of the process to date. Attached and in Dropbox <https://www.dropbox.com/home/CoordinationGroup/January%202015%20blog%20post> is a draft. Please send feedback to the list. It would be great to get this posted early next week.
Given the blog format, I took a few liberties with the language and tone — there is a little (attempted) humor in there.
Alissa
Agree .. It looks great and was very well received by the community .. Many thanks Alissa and thanks to those who have contributed with their comments .. Kind regards --Manal -----Original Message----- From: internal-cg-bounces@icann.org [mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Russ Housley Sent: Wednesday, January 21, 2015 8:26 PM To: Alissa Cooper Cc: ICG Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] Blog post The updated blog post <transition-planning-internet-style-01.docx> looks great. Thanks. Russ On Jan 16, 2015, at 09:49 AM, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:
Last week we had some mailing list discussion about a blog post I could write to provide an update about timing, next steps, and our perspective of the process to date. Attached and in Dropbox <https://www.dropbox.com/home/CoordinationGroup/January%202015%20blog%20 post> is a draft. Please send feedback to the list. It would be great to get this posted early next week.
Given the blog format, I took a few liberties with the language and tone - there is a little (attempted) humor in there.
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+1 On 22 January 2015 18:19:46 GMT+11:00, Manal Ismail <manal@tra.gov.eg> wrote:
Agree .. It looks great and was very well received by the community .. Many thanks Alissa and thanks to those who have contributed with their comments ..
Kind regards --Manal
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The updated blog post <transition-planning-internet-style-01.docx> looks great. Thanks.
Russ
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Last week we had some mailing list discussion about a blog post I could write to provide an update about timing, next steps, and our perspective of the process to date. Attached and in Dropbox <https://www.dropbox.com/home/CoordinationGroup/January%202015%20blog%20 post> is a draft. Please send feedback to the list. It would be great to get this posted early next week.
Given the blog format, I took a few liberties with the language and tone - there is a little (attempted) humor in there.
Alissa
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