Dear IRT, The following items include corrections to remove “or generate” and “or collect” in cases where they do not apply. Also is a deletion for RFC reference where it isn’t needed. Please see the rotational provided via comment for the changes 223 Review OneDoc corrections in section 6.4<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SVFkoI6RmrVVz--RrVLSOj1bmz1qLb7_JTuvt7At4Uo/edit>, 7.2.4, 7.4, 20220801 Thank you for your prompt response as we prepare for the public comment. -- Kind Regards, Dennis S. Chang GDD Programs Director Phone: +1 213 293 7889 Sykpe: dennisSchang www.icann.org<http://www.icann.org> One World – One Internet