Perhaps the text on the NRO was a tragic failure? mark Greg Ruth wrote:
Well, I kinda liked the text on NRO, but I'll go along with the majority.
Greg
--- Mark McFadden <mcfadden@21st-century-texts.com> wrote:
All:
Here is version 1.3 of the ISPCP Response to the Department of Commerce's Request for Comments on the ICANN MoU. Once again, I have attached it in Microsoft Word and PDF formats.
Here are the substantial changes in the document:
- I have incorporated Greg's suggested text about formalizing the administration of the root servers in section 2.5 (page 4); - I have changed the words "tragic attempt" to misguided attempt" in the discussion of weighted voting in section 2.4; - I have tried to clarify the goal of improving existing relationships with other related Internet organizations in some text in section 2.7; - After Tony's comment, I have removed the text related to the NRO in
section 2.2 and 2.4;
I'd be very happy to have further comments from the Constituency for a final draft. I'd like to send our comments to Commerce in the next 48
hours so please "Reply All" with comments as soon as you are able.
mark
Mark McFadden Secretariat ISPCP Constituency
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