Thanks, Hazem. I have fixed those errors. I also added slide number. It makes it easier to navigate in the PDF version. An updated version is enclosed. Bill, you are the native speaker, I am not. Please comment any language that is too deviating from the norm. Mats -- --- Mats Dufberg mats.dufberg@internetstiftelsen.se Technical Expert Internetstiftelsen (The Swedish Internet Foundation) Mobile: +46 73 065 3899 https://internetstiftelsen.se/ From: Hazem Hezzah <hhezzah.las@gmail.com> Organisation: LAS Date: Sunday, 26 September 2021 at 14:49 To: Mats Dufberg <mats.dufberg@internetstiftelsen.se> Cc: ICANN Latin GP <latingp@icann.org> Subject: RE: [Latingp] ICANN72 Prep Week - RZ-LGR Update Hello Mats, Now the part about “Appendix B” is duplicated at end of Slide 6 and start of Slide 7 . Another minor note in Slide 7: “….for each language found in the chapter 9.” Regards, Hazem Hezzah From: Latingp <latingp-bounces@icann.org<mailto:latingp-bounces@icann.org>> On Behalf Of Mats Dufberg via Latingp Sent: 25 September, 2021 16:12 To: ICANN Latin GP <Latingp@icann.org<mailto:Latingp@icann.org>> Subject: Re: [Latingp] ICANN72 Prep Week - RZ-LGR Update Slide 2 is updated with the end of comments date and a link to the proposal. Else no changes since last version. (Thanks Bill.) Mats -- --- Mats Dufberg mats.dufberg@internetstiftelsen.se<mailto:mats.dufberg@internetstiftelsen.se> Technical Expert Internetstiftelsen (The Swedish Internet Foundation) Mobile: +46 73 065 3899 https://internetstiftelsen.se/