As you can see below, I sent in revised text minutes before presenting Anything New today. I understand that a decision was reached this morning to move the item to the single whois policy focus, and just have a pointer to that from the Anything new section. I understand that Cathrin has a takeaway to work on the language, and I volunteer to help with the remaining pointer/placeholder on the GDPR in anything new. cheers Stephanie -------- Forwarded Message -------- Subject: Re: Subgroup 2 Anything New report Date: Thu, 26 Jul 2018 16:58:20 +0200 From: Stephanie Perrin <stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca> To: Lisa Phifer <lisa@corecom.com> CC: Alice Jansen <alice.jansen@icann.org> Not completed yet, but part is there.... SP On 2018-07-21 09:07, Lisa Phifer wrote:
Hi Stephanie,
I wanted to draw your attention to the gap assessment on your subgroup report: https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/71604731/Subgroup2-Anything...
- Draft to be updated to include material presented on ICANN62 slides (attached) - Subsection 1: Contains methodology which should be moved to Subsection 2. - Subsection 3: Table needs to be updated to reflect ICANN62 slide. Center column and ?main findings? list should be fleshed out to tie back to key questions currently listed in Subsection 1. - Subsection 4: Template text/action item to be replaced with ICANN62 slide text - Subsection 5: Template text to be replaced with Subgroup?s overall conclusion
Please provide any report updates to address these gaps no later than *Sunday 22 July 23:59 UTC*
Thank you Lisa