Dear RSSAC Caucus Members, Thanks everyone who sent in comments on the How it Works slides. I took all the comments received and put them in a single Google doc. Here I responded to individual comments, sometimes saying why I implemented the comment and sometimes explaining why I didn't. https://docs.google.com/document/d/11rHehzjbJozCax9yKKGDqVCQMjSMgyU1XVaVQnzA... Here is the version I sent to the list on January 14th. I'm now calling this v1. https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1arBlU1OKHvx2ju-Sgw5lA-rxpmiSsURtnLL4... Here is the new version of the How it Works slide deck. I'm calling this v2. https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1asB-T9NJzgAzdmYTHYFdeNmln5a7CbS0Vlpd... Because I moved slides around you need to use the v1 slide numbers when reading the comments in the Google doc. I could not implement all of the suggestions received, but I tried to implement as many as I could. Thanks, Andrew
On 14 Jan 2025, at 21:06, Andrew McConachie <andrew.mcconachie@icann.org> wrote:
Dear RSSAC Caucus Members,
At most ICANN meetings the RSSAC gives an introductory presentation on the RSS as part of ICANN's How it Works series. The RSSAC will be giving this presentation again at ICANN 82.
In the past, reviewing the presentation prior to the meeting has been an RSSAC activity and the presentation has changed very little. For ICANN 82, the RSSAC Admin Committee thought it would be good to get feedback from the Caucus on this presentation. Especially since a good number of the people on this list have seen this presentation at least once. Are there things you would change about it?
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1arBlU1OKHvx2ju-Sgw5lA-rxpmiSsURtnLL4...
It's hard to annotate a Google presentation in line. If you would like to propose edits please specify the slide number and precisely what you would change in an email to this mailing list.
This review will close on January 28th. After that I'll develop a new version based on the comments received.
Thanks, Andrew