Hi James Thanks, your text changes are very helpful. I have also looked at your other comments throughout the text. Would you like to propose alternative language to build on your comments? I would appreciate it if you could do so. Kind regards Emily On 11 November 2011 05:15, James M. Bladel <jbladel@godaddy.com> wrote:
Team:
Per our most recent call, I've made a few slight edits to the Letter to Compliance (draft). The changes are:
* Corrected "Registries and Registries" to read "Registries and Registrars" in two instances. * Struck "regulated" and inserted "monitored." * Added bullet point noting the technical & operational challenges faced by ICANN Compliance. To ensure that this is appropriately attributed, I put this squarely on my head (at minimum).
Thank you,
J.
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