Hi all, Thanks for sending this through so quickly Olof, and thanks to all for contributing to what has become a very good paper. In reading it just now, I noticed a tiny typo in last night's additions (a double space, and also I think a missing 'the'). I also noticed that the applicable laws/privacy heading was sitting at the bottom of a page while all the content was on the next page. I fixed those in track, and I hope they're as uncontroversial as they seemed to me. The only other thing I noticed is two unfinished sentences in the intro which were placeholders for a closing date for submissions and an address to send submissions. I couldn't remember if we'd already discussed this, so I just highlighted the sentences yellow so that they get sorted before it's sent out. Other than that, it all looks good to me and I look forward to seeing responses as they come in. Cheers, Peter From: rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org [mailto:rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Olof Nordling Sent: Wednesday, 8 June 2011 11:57 PM To: rt4-whois@icann.org Subject: Re: [Rt4-whois] Discussion paper, draft final version Dear Review Team members, Oh well, I found two errors in the version I just posted to you - apologies for that, my mistakes. Please replace with the attached version, where they are corrected. Very best regards Olof From: rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org [mailto:rt4-whois-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Olof Nordling Sent: Wednesday, June 08, 2011 3:37 PM To: rt4-whois@icann.org Subject: [Rt4-whois] Discussion paper, draft final version Dear Review Team members, Please find an updated version of the Discussion Paper, as edited at the call earlier today. This is the draft final version, so please read carefully and react promptly if any errors or omissions are found. Very best regards Alice and Olof ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The information transmitted is for the use of the intended recipient only and may contain confidential and/or legally privileged material. Any review, re-transmission, disclosure, dissemination or other use of, or taking of any action in reliance upon, this information by persons or entities other than the intended recipient is prohibited and may result in severe penalties. If you have received this e-mail in error please notify the Security Advisor of the Department of Broadband, Communications and the Digital Economy, 38 Sydney Ave, Forrest ACT 2603, telephone (02) 6271-1376 and delete all copies of this transmission together with any attachments. Please consider the environment before printing this email. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------