Looks good. I have two general suggestions.. Slide 5 - Scope of work has small characters, from distance they become non-readable, either we break this into two slides or set up with bigger fonts. I have faced this in my LGR presentations. Slide 4- It can be sorted by name or organisation, as per your choice. Thanks. Dr. Ajay DATA | Founder & CEO Get email id like अजय@डाटा.भारत in your own language,visit www.xgenplus.com From: "Tan Tanaka,Dennis via RZ-LGR-SG" MailId : [85118713]To: "rz-lgr-sg@icann.org" Subject: [RZ-LGR-SG] Slides for ICANN 63 - your input requiredDate: 27 Sep 2018 12:38:37 AM All, I put this slides together for a brief update at ICANN 63. As you will see they are meant as a guide for the presentation and not as a script to read from, except for a few slides in which longer text is better . Slides 7 and 8 basically convey the same thing, but are in different formats. I&rsquom still debating myself as to which one to remove . Let me know your thoughts, did I miss anything? Please send me your comments in the Notes section of the corresponding slide or just write an email . I would like to deliver a final deck to Sarmad by end of this week, so if you can give me your comments by Friday, that&rsquod be great . Thank you, Dennis _______________________________________________RZ-LGR-SG mailing listRZ-LGR-SG@icann.orghttps://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/rz-lgr-sgDo not Remove:[HID]2018092700383758[-HID] [XGENFOOTER] [-XGENFOOTER]