Dessaleng, Gaurav and Ajay – Thank you for your comments. Here is the revised version. I won’t ship the slides until the weekend, in case anyone else has something else to add. Thanks, Dennis From: RZ-LGR-SG <rz-lgr-sg-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Dr Ajay Data <ajay@data.in> Date: Thursday, September 27, 2018 at 8:22 AM To: `tan tanakadennis via rz-lgr-sg` <rz-lgr-sg@icann.org> Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [RZ-LGR-SG] Slides for ICANN 63 - your input required Looks good. I have two general suggestions.. Slide 5 - Scope of work has small characters, from distance they become non-readable, either we break this into two slides or set up with bigger fonts. I have faced this in my LGR presentations. Slide 4- It can be sorted by name or organisation, as per your choice. Thanks. Dr. Ajay DATA | Founder & CEO Get email id like अजय@डाटा.भारत in your own language, visit www.xgenplus.com<http://www.xgenplus.com/> ________________________________ From: "Tan Tanaka,Dennis via RZ-LGR-SG" <rz-lgr-sg@icann.org> MailId : [85118713] To: "rz-lgr-sg@icann.org" <rz-lgr-sg@icann.org> Subject: [RZ-LGR-SG] Slides for ICANN 63 - your input required Date: 27 Sep 2018 12:38:37 AM All, I put this slides together for a brief update at ICANN 63. As you will see they are meant as a guide for the presentation and not as a script to read from, except for a few slides in which longer text is better. Slides 7 and 8 basically convey the same thing, but are in different formats. I’m still debating myself as to which one to remove. Let me know your thoughts, did I miss anything? Please send me your comments in the Notes section of the corresponding slide or just write an email. I would like to deliver a final deck to Sarmad by end of this week, so if you can give me your comments by Friday, that’d be great. Thank you, Dennis _______________________________________________ RZ-LGR-SG mailing list RZ-LGR-SG@icann.org https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/rz-lgr-sg Do not Remove: [HID]2018092700383758[-HID] [XGENFOOTER] [-XGENFOOTER] [Image removed by sender.][Image removed by sender.]