Hi Dennis, Thank you for your comments. I will update the doc based on your suggestions. Ok we can discuss them during the upcoming meeting, due to technical issues I have missed most of the calls held previously, hopefully the technical issues will be resolved soon and I will be able to attend future meetings. Kind regards, Dessalegn On Wed, Jul 18, 2018 at 5:28 PM Tan Tanaka, Dennis <dtantanaka@verisign.com> wrote:

Hi Dessalegn,

Thanks for putting this together. It’s a good start, a few comments:

1. Use the same terms/words we use in the document. For example: “RZ-LGR changes” instead of “RZ-LGR update triggers”. 2. You are suggesting some things should be in scope, but I believe we talked about it during our calls. Maybe we should discuss about them again?

More comments in document.

Best,

Dennis

*From: *RZ-LGR-SG <rz-lgr-sg-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Dessalegn Yehuala <mequanint.yehuala@gmail.com> *Date: *Saturday, July 14, 2018 at 4:41 AM *To: *"rz-lgr-sg@icann.org" <rz-lgr-sg@icann.org> *Subject: *[EXTERNAL] [RZ-LGR-SG] Conceptual Model of RZ_LGRs application

Hi All,

Attached please find a draft conceptual model of RZ_LGRs application. I tried as exhaustive as I could in uncovering the technical issues that surround the application of the RZ_LGRs, and I am sure there are still issues left uncovered.,You can comment on it, add/ omit elements which you think are necessary/unnecessary. The conceptual model is a complementary piece to the working document under development. It can be integrated seamlessly.

Kind regards,

Dessalegn